I'm a horrible reader because I normally forget to write reviews, and when I do it's normally "Great story" or bs like that.
I love your story, it does have some predictable parts, but that comes from keeping sesshomaru in character for now. I love the mix of night fury dragon and inuyasha, it unique and gives the story interesting twists. I have been following this story sence chapter one and love how it has progressed. I always can't wait for the next chapter and a small part of me wants to wait till you are done to read it.
Great story love the plot
LavenV (Chapter 13) - Tue 27 May 2014
For all the jealous motions regarding Kagome he have done the same to her except this time she didn't cheat on him only go behind his back to ask for Sesshoumaru's help for the dragon egg she guards. He is hanyou couldn't he use his nose to tell whether she is innocent of her act or not instead of outright accuse of treason or betray based on little information he sees as evidence. I'm glad to see he had grown up some what after he had calm down to think rationally instead of letting his brashness to continue since in the end it will hurt both parties.
To Inuyasha may be okay to be two timing since one is his old lover and the other a new love. To him since he is male it is okay to have more than one women. But to Kagome it is not okay and if she does the same to him like he does it to her, to him every male she gets contact with will be a big no since in his logic she belong to her like a possession meant to be possessed. By thinking this way will only hurt the love one more than anything else can.
After all these adventures with Sesshoumaru's party and Inuyasha's party when they cross each other things bound to be changed eventually. I like the slow developing between Sesshoumaru and Kagome instead of having them jump straight to it without some hard evidence as when, how, or why things happen the way it is happening.
Nice chapter, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Great story, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Very good chapter. Love Miroku's portrayal. Really great! Looking forward to more chapters, hopefully.
I just want to point out something: "..she should teach Nero to make ???? when he was flying" -- I don't know if you're using symbols that my laptop can't read or you've forgotten to write anything there, so I hope you can fix it later :)
Anyway, this chapter shows several things I haven't noticed before until Miroku pointed them out. I love this Miroku-wise-mode, by the way, and then finally understand how much is her power. Not that I don't acknowledge her as the Shikon Miko, but to read the facts such as keeping the jewel pure without any training or awareness of something inside your body--heck, it's an accomplishment not everyone can achieve.
Thank you for the update!
mari (Chapter 13) - Thu 22 May 2014
thanks for the update loved it.
ooooh!!! I want to know who she connected with! Please update soon ~~ the curiousity will kill me XD
I really love how Miroku was able to turn Inuyasha's and Kikyo's harsh words into something so positive and really get Kagome thinking. A lot of stories just sort of brush over Miroku's wisdom but he's always been a wise voice in the group.
Loved it!
Ana (Chapter 13) - Thu 22 May 2014
Ohhhhhhh clifhanger! :3 EVIL!!! xD
Thanks for the update! <3
Ana (Chapter 12) - Sat 08 Mar 2014
I love your story! It's very creative! :D
Thank you for charing it with us! <3
This story is sooooooooooooo sweet.... Luv this so much... its fresh, funny, fluffy... made me smile when i red it...
Please update this story, can't wait the progress between daiyokai and lil miko.
Thanks :)
Great story, keep it coming.
Keep 'em comin'
:-)!
rose (Chapter 12) - Wed 05 Mar 2014
next chapter please
mari (Chapter 12) - Wed 05 Mar 2014
awesome update thanks.
LOL I like this plot, very original.
I am excited to see how powerful Nero gets. Love the name too!
I am loving this story. I want a dragon. I know they're extinct now, what with prince's coming and killing them to rescue don' fair maidens. I would have let the dragon eat the prince. Boys have cooties anyways. Now to see if my unicorn will be cool with it.
This fic is to die for!!!! Please, update soon!
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