This chapter was awesome, I can not wait. Love it, love it.

I do love all the emotional intricacies you managed to weave in this chapter! I'm even more curious to know what happened in Sai's past right now! Poor Miroku...he's destined to be denied of his beloved Sango's embrace one way or another lol! Great chapter, I loved it! Keep up the great work^^

Love it! More Sesshoumaru/Kagome interaction please! Few stories have him slowly woo her like how this seems to be going. Keep it up!

You are doing an excellent job with this fic. It's extremely riveting. I am glued to your every word. I'm enjoying this twist with Kagome and Sesshoumaru. The Shikon has somehow leaked youki into Kagome? I'm with her, what does that make her and what will it all mean to her humanity? What ever it is, Sesshoumaru seems quite attracted to it, even if he doesn't fully understand it.

I also like how you've made this new character of Sai part of the whole story by giving us her a background story. Seems you really thought this girl's existence out. Good job with that.

Oh, and this thing with that old dark miko taking Kikyou...very interesting plot bunny going on there.

Well, until the next time.   JEN

Woah Sai went all physcho killer mode... That's crazy. I mean I always knew she was hurting about the betrayal that she had to face head on, but  stil! But I give a round of applause to sango. * what I say next is not to offend any lesbians that read this review I swear!!!* i would have stabbed her too if she tried to kiss me too yuck! I mean come on.... If Sai hadn't interruped Sango from making out with Miroku she may have finally gotten herself some. I'm just saying she knows what side she's on. No question about that* stab* lmfao i was dying with laughter when I read that part! In my mind I was like noooooo dont do it Sango!!! Lol sorry I had to put that text slang in there I was feeling very passionate about that. Anywho I really love this chapter. I do pray that miroku and sango don't travel too far for Sai not to get them... I mean.  I hope, that way she can maybe, hopefully explain her emotional turmoil. Maybe her releasing her hurt and rage may finally get her friends! Great chapter update loving it!!!

Keep it coming.

Wow what a deep chapter. I love the raw emotions that were expressed in this chapter. My heart really goes out to Inuyasha, but I just don't feel that gives him the right to have them both, like how he wants. Kagome and Kikyo are the same ancestry wise, but that is the only thing that makes them the same. In a sense he has lost Kagome and Kikyo. He recently lost Kagome to Sesshomaru, and lost Kikyo 50 or more years ago. The foreshadowing dream that he had may not have been true all the way (with her dying), but he did lose Kagome completely to someone that will finally love her. What a dream though.  I don't know what I would do if I had such a horrible dream such as that. Gosh that was a FANTASTIC chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope Miroku, Sango, and Shippo are alright. You know Sai still can't be trusted. I do wonder what Sai will do when she finds out about her precious master Naraku...muhaha 

Well that's enough of me being weird. I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the GREAT work!!! Sorry about the late review usually I am great about making sure to review when you add your new chapter....one word...College. Lol what a drag that word can be. -_-

Oh god. His dream was so sad. I almost cried. 

Anyway, OH YEAH! Keep the steam on for Kags and Sess!

I wonder...OMG are you gonna make Haru and Sai get together?!?! You should since of course Kags will never return her feelings.

I wonder if this is just Inuyasha's consciousness at work or something else. And poor naive Kagome tring to get better faster but just digging herself further into the hole. Wonder if she will be mated by the time her friends show up. I can't wait to see what happens next and how you all tie it in together :)

I wonder if this is just Inuyasha's consciousness at work or something else. And poor naive Kagome tring to get better faster but just digging herself further into the hole. Wonder if she will be mated by the time her friends show up. I can't wait to see what happens next and how you all tie it in together :)

Oh, I loved the emotional torture he went through twice; awake, and in his dream. Poor fellow, you almost feel sorry for him. He was unable to choose, and, in the end, he lost them both. I especially liked this chapter. Just the right amount of angst for my tastes, yay! Love this story!!

Keep it coming.

this is so sexy! I can't wait for more!

much love!

You put zombies in here! AWESOME! Lol I can't believe how good this is getting. Inuyasha split up and left Sanyo, Shippo, and Miroku with Sai... Idk about this. I don't think that was a wise decision. I love how you have inuyasha believes that Kikyo is still alive...I wonder if Kikyo is going to turn into a zombie and have to fight inuyasha. Great chapter can't wait for more!!! 

Keep it coming.

Hope you update soon i really love this story! :D

Keep it coming.

First off, I love this chapter. I'm sure I'll be saying this many times to you in the future but it'll always be true! I really enjoy the interaction between Haru and Kagome, how realistic it feels from both their perspectives. Thought Kagome's pov is obviously colored by your own cultural views regarding her nudity and bathing with haru's assistance, it came across feel more modern hesitation then cultural misunderstanding. I honestly wasn't expecting Sesshomaru to show up this chapter but he sure did! Grooming is very important and surprisingly personal, he took to it well even to her voiced adjustments. I do hope though that kagome does get over this, of course he doesn't want me, phase quickly or at least Sesshomaru realizes her thoughts and challenges them without too much drama lol I mean come on kags, he's rather obviously touching you on purpose here lol silly almost human XD another factor I love, you didn't make that too easy and just gave her power, at least she has to work for it! I'm sure Sesshomaru is more then happy to provide tehe!

Firstly, thankyou for not jumping into an outright lemon, I am begining to enjoy the drawn out foreplay.

secondly some of your grammar, or should I say "tenses" and plurals, clothes, always has an "e". please while you haven't done so yet, don't have anyone "drugged" along a floor, or nails/claws against a wall,

Thirdly, Keep going girl (?) :o if I didn't like it, you would not be getting a review this far in

Thankyou

I am definitely enjoying your story and greatly eager for more.