Woohoo, bring on more drama!! And intimacy between Sessh and Kags!
Kar (Chapter 15) - Sat 05 Jan 2013
Damn.... That was hot lol, more please! Lol
KAR
Kar (Chapter 5) - Fri 04 Jan 2013
one of the two lovers shud get sick so the other takes care of theM then some fun lol and the next day the other one is sick. I was thinking maybe Sesshomaru and kags takes care of him and while Sesshomaru is delusional with his fever u can throw in some "funny moments" lol wink wink, and of course Kagome gets a little cold the next day In which they now both have to get over, but of course lord Sesshomaru gets better first since he is all powerful..... Jus a suggestion...... It wud be funny.... Lol
KAR
Oh my goodness I loved it the interaction between Kagome and Sesshomaru at the end was beautiful I can't wait for the next update. Please let that be soon
Cursed multi tabs; my bad, that last review was for different fanfic. This is not meant to diminish The Perfect Mate's worthiness in any way! Just a foolish mistake on account of fatigue due to my royally screwed sleep management. This story is still held in awesome regard!
By the way, I started reading A Demon Lord's Cry at around 10 p.m. It is now 4 a.m. and my tired eyes do NOT regret!!
Further impressed by the weaving of your story combined with your dynamic descriptions and the heated feelings you make tangible; in other simpler terms, I'm loving it! Keep em coming, no rest for the wicked!
Terry ann (Chapter 2) - Thu 27 Dec 2012
A few tense errors but good so far.
Azumii (Chapter 15) - Wed 26 Dec 2012
You... You evil, evil BelovedStranger!! I need more... really I NEED it. Please! xoxox
Azumii
I don't know how to explain that which I felt at realizing I was caught up with all of the chapters of your amazing masterpiece! I was disheartened, impatient and eager all at once. It has been a while since I've felt like that about a story. I simply enjoy your descriptions. Mostly, however, I love how you make Sesshomaru-sama and Kagome's encounters so innocent, yet erotic all at once. It is hard to do something like that so well in the manner that you do. Please, please updatee soon! I am impatient to read more of this beautiful love story!
Waiting thoughtfully behind my iPhone,
- Vou
Koi (Chapter 15) - Wed 26 Dec 2012
“This Sesshomaru shares in your desires.”
What I would give to hear Sesshomaru say that to me. I loved this chapter. I love the interactions you have Kagome and Sesshomaru in. They are so cute. I can't wait until Kagome just admits that she loves him. I mean come on who wouldn't want a good looking and rich demon. I would call that person crazy and insane if they said "not me"... I love your story. It is getting so good. I hope you got to enjoy your Christmas and received tons of gifts. I would like to take the time out to also say thank you so much for this wonderful Christmas gift! Because you did not have to update this story, but you did and i am so grateful. Thank you and I wish you with more creativity to come. :3)
I wanted to say Happy Holidays and Wonderful chapter. I can't wait to find out whats going to happen.
Nilee1 (Chapter 15) - Wed 26 Dec 2012
Wow-- just Wow!
LittleRin (Chapter 15) - Wed 26 Dec 2012
Wow. Just... wow. Update soon. Evil cliff-hangerer!
I have ot say that this chapter was very enlightening in many, many wonderful ways! Definitely one of my favorites this far, although, you're doing an amazing job on the entirety of this story. So many twists and events are happening, you alaways leave me at the edge of my seat waiting for more!
I swear, single fathers are the downfall of every woman. I don't know what it is that makes them so irresisitible, but just the sight of a gorgeous man cuddling with his daughter or playing with his son is just too cute for words *nearly faints at the image*
I see they are finally making some progress if she could accept his youki and make it her own this time. Of course, if she could only accept another part of his, now that would be, ehem, sorry....got carried away a bit there. Loved the lime!! Have I mentioned how much I adore limes? I think I even prefer them from full blown lemons for some reasons...the steady building tension is just so yummy!
He finally spilled the beans, huh? Bold move, Sesshoumaru, but I would expect nothing less from you *giggles*
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Pricila (Chapter 15) - Wed 26 Dec 2012
Brilliant!! I love this chapter and now Kags can no longer feign ignorance Sessh feels as she does!!! Yeah!
Samantha (Chapter 15) - Tue 25 Dec 2012
WOWOWOWZERS!!!! That was intense I loved this chapter! I loved the parting statement. How does it get any better than this!
Keep it coming, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Samara (Chapter 15) - Tue 25 Dec 2012
wow... i was kinda let down from the last chapter, but this one tottally made up for it... thanks for the update...
Darrakk (Chapter 15) - Tue 25 Dec 2012
More please! Can't wait to to see how things go!
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