Ok so I LOVE this story. This is like the umpteenth time ive read it. My only complaint with it is how MANY dozens of chapters have nothing to do with the main story, sesshomaru and kagome. I always forget this fact, and then when I read it again I remember because every time I find myself skipping chapters (like this one) that don't really contribute to the story enough to warrant a WHOLE chapter. And despite ignoring these chapters I'm never left feeling like ive missed something in skipping ahead. I'll love LOVE this story, but I honestly think it would be better to eliminate the excess if you're able. It would really tighten it up and keep the reader focused on the main characters and their story.
Revang (Chapter 39) - Wed 01 May 2019
Lol poor Sesshoumaru, getting the whole “we need to talk” line.
Good Tale
I admire your thought process and explanation at the end about the dark miko. But it could just as easily be argued that reiki and youki can coexist despite the battle. I give u the shikon jewel. But even that argument isn't full proof because there's a battle in the bloody thing and if u wish on it all things go to shit. But still the jewel was formed so it isn't that far fetched that a Kagome could have kept the pure light, ying and yang.
Woa friendxone but he doesn't even get it ????. I liked that bed crawl scene ♥?
Blythe (Chapter 34) - Thu 17 Aug 2017
So, I've only finished chapter 34. I read your note at the end and I chuckled. Just wanted to say that I personally like the pairing of Sango and Miroku, however, I do enjoy mixing things up with original characters and such when there's a good story, and I simply LOVE this story. I can't stop reading it.
Also, congrats, this is the first review I'm posting here on Dokuga. :D
Great story. Really left me craving for more with each chapter. Definitely worth the read.
This Fanfic is Amazing... it took 2 weeks to read but i love it!!!!
It had all the right parts emotions man... I was TRIGGERED
I wish that Sango Shippo And Miroku could have been at the wedding though!!!!
this was Loverly as Ian Kabra from 39 clues would say!!
i comend the author!!!
ponpiri (Chapter 48) - Tue 14 Mar 2017
Seriously kagome is a bit annoying and really dense in this story. EXTRA dense. If the demonic energy from the shikon was slowly leaking into her body/soul, then it follows that she would have converted anyway and would have died without a strong demon's aid. The reason why Kikyo fell prey to Naraku's deception is because her love with Inu wasn't 'pure' as they thought. And she never found happiness in her rebirth because she carried her bitterness with her.
I think this story is amazing, but my gosh Kagome shows her ignorance and hyopcrisy so blatantly without realizing or admitting it. I'm glad you were able to point this out in a believable way via Naraku's accusations re: her so-called forgiveness, Sesshou pointing it out by the way she regarded him against Inu and her not being able to cleanse the jewel because of misplaced blame. Even though I like Kagome's character for the most part, she tends to be absolved of a lot of her flaws just because she's the main. It's refreshing to see an author that tries to tackle who she is without turning her into a living saint.
ponpiri (Chapter 31) - Tue 14 Mar 2017
Ok. Kagome is being a bit selfish and acting just like the 'love' of her life, Inuyasha. You friendzone the guy and then use him for comfort? That ain't nice at all...
ponpiri (Chapter 27) - Mon 13 Mar 2017
I'm sensing a very strong theme, here. I guess you could say being a youkai that isn't tied down by human sentamentality is more free. I can totally get Sess' frustrations at Kagome (and humans in general) hypocrisy.
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