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Phyllis (Chapter 14) - Thu 20 Sep 2012

Awesome chapter!  What a sweet, almost kissy moment between them!  For a moment, I definitely thought he was going through her window for more naughty purposes, but one can hope can't one?  Great work!  I look forward to seeing what happens with our favorite couple!


TERRYANNA (Chapter 9) - Thu 20 Sep 2012

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LONGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is a good story so far and there are few grammatical errors which I am a huge stickler for. Only one thing really disappoints me and that's the length of the chapters. Other than that and the very few grammar mistakes you have a really good story so far.


Liz (Chapter 13) - Mon 17 Sep 2012

Omg!! I can't get enough of this story!!! it's soo good, so well done. I did note one thing that could be corrected. Your use of the word dowager is in the wrong context. Dowager is for a widow, i.e. the Queen Dowager, like Queen Elizabeth II grandmother was called the Dowager while Elizabeth's mother wanted to be called the Queen Mum. I hope that this helps :) Otherwise, I can't wait for your next update.


joyouki (Chapter 13) - Sat 15 Sep 2012

I could read this for hours....I cant wait for another chapter....I like that he is telling her the truth behind his actions him never feeling things before.....I hope the next chapter has goodies in it lol


His Lady (Chapter 13) - Sat 15 Sep 2012

SOOOOOO NOW I think it's only appropriate that you do a chapter about Sesshomaru and how his mind works so we can kinda get a feeling about what he is confused about when it comes to Kagome. Just a small suggestion (*wink*) lolz. But anyway i LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon


Dana Daidouji (Chapter 13) - Sat 15 Sep 2012

I really like this story! Though the corporate setting is not new, this seems very fresh and I had a great time reading! I also happen to like your characterizations very much. Keep up with the good work!


Andrea (Chapter 13) - Fri 14 Sep 2012

"This is not the feudal era Sesshomaru" XD I died. Loving this story! Keep it coming.


Toni Osborn (Chapter 13) - Fri 14 Sep 2012

I have to say I find this story amusing as hell, as an office worker who spends 8 hours a day staring at a screen it's nice to find something amusing to read during my down time as rare as it is. I'm looking forward to the chapters to come and see if you have any other litttle twists in store, like how Kagome is going to react when she finds out that this whole investigation is a fake, lol. Personally I think he should have to sweat under the collar a little, I'd hate being forced to go through files that are totally meaningless and a complete waste of time. A little zap or two maybe, lol? Keep at it.


cassandra (Chapter 13) - Fri 14 Sep 2012

Poor Kagome has to be going crazy. Sesshomaru is so confussing! Update soon.


Alexandra (Chapter 13) - Fri 14 Sep 2012

cute chapter!! that's priceless w/ the ringtone and also that Toga was thinking of the courting thing already lol!! can't wait for more and keep up the great work on your stories!!


shintochick (Chapter 13) - Fri 14 Sep 2012

Fantastic!  I hope this is a turning point for both of them in that Kagome can understand how he is grappling with having these emotions and Sesshomaru can understand the emotions are not to be feared.  Love, love, love this story.  Plus you made me hungry for Italian : )


Alii (Chapter 12) - Wed 12 Sep 2012

AAw


joyouki (Chapter 12) - Tue 11 Sep 2012

omg this is complete juice...just love it...the chemistry they is so great...wished you had 20 chapters posted lol


Sala (Chapter 12) - Tue 11 Sep 2012

“It already has.” Kagome answered while slipping a ten dollar bill in his TIP jar, before turning to retreat to a secluded table outside and enjoy the English air.


Just FYI: the British use pounds, not dollars.  ;)


Raven (Chapter 12) - Tue 11 Sep 2012

Hi,

I absolutely love your story.  I look forward to all your updates:)!  I really your portrayal of Sesshomaru and Kagome.  I like that she is very strong, independent and does not allow herself to be bullied by her boss. 


Madam Fluffy (Chapter 12) - Mon 10 Sep 2012

I think that Sesshomaru has a male form of PMS it can happen. plus like some men he's a dog. I just hope that Kagome gives him a peice of her mind. thanks for wrighing


Mikazuki (Chapter 12) - Mon 10 Sep 2012

That was flippin' awesome! Thank you!


Phyllis (Chapter 12) - Mon 10 Sep 2012

I really loved that chapter!  How humble Sesshomaru must have made himself to apologize to her!  It shows he cares more than he usually does.  I can't wait to see where this goes!  Thanks for the update!


cassandra (Chapter 12) - Mon 10 Sep 2012

Keep up the good work.


Ashley bodden (Chapter 2) - Fri 07 Sep 2012

*Face Palm* LOL... What is it with Toga and Grandpuppies!...but man I would totally have Toga's puppies.... and Sesshomaru's.


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