YUP! Definitely enough lemony goodness...for now. LOL. Thank you for the update.
First, I am totally and thoroughly hooked on this. Now, I know what Sessh did was technically devious and some could also say despicable, and yes, kidnapping to a degree, but she IS his assistant after all and is on call to him whenever he wishes. He could just say that he knew of no other way to get her away from those (InuYasha, Father's constant manipulating) who would otherwise influence his desire to know her further and try to convince her to remain his assisant permenently.
He wasn't fully intent on having these feelings of his go beyond professional, but by allowing himself to bed her and then request to court her, he's put himself in an extremely delicate situation should she find out that the whole fraud and stolen money investigation was nothing but a scheme to get her to and keep her in London. I sure hope he doesn't think she'll ever find out because secrets always find their way out of hiding and usually at THE most inconvenient of times. Kagome being angry will be a given.
Now, the thing that has me really curious about...and your are the writer... #1 they didn't even THINK about pregnancy, Now don't get me wrong. I've been there and DONE that. "Who really cares when this is feeling sooo incredibly delicious and I'm having THE most best high I've ever felt." But....Sesshoumaru is OLD enough to know better. "So, Sesshoumaru? Can you tell if she's fertile or not??? 'Cause boy, I'd be thinking hard on that after I'm more clear minded. So, if you don't know, No glove no love, dude." #2 Sesshoumaru's fangs elongated in preparation of leaving a mating mark, right? And he fought this. It's always nice to ask your victim,whoops, I meant intended mate before, ne? Well, my query is this, Kagome went and bit him on the neck and collarbone area...does her bite count for anything??? or is this a one bite mating only from the male? 'Cause if it is and opinions count before you upload a new chapter, I opt for Sesshoumaru being unaware and surprised that Kagome took the first bite and in doing so, Kagome mated him first and there's no taking it back....Well, what do you think? I LIKE IT! But you are the writer and I am just good at asking questions.
Love this lots and really can't wait to see what comes next. TA!!! JEN
First sex and then courtship, his father should be so happy, lol. Inuyasha's going to go beserk. I loved it, intense till the very end.
kyo (Chapter 17) - Thu 27 Sep 2012
And not only will her reaction to the fake fraud be entertaining but there was no mention of condom so pregnancy is another fun surprise that could be entertaining
pah! if i was dragged off to London to stay at a luxury suite and given the shag of a lifetime by the ridiculously hot demon lord, I wouldn't care at all if the fraud was a fake. I'd welcome it and hope that "emergency" situations would arise in the future for sexcapades at exotic locations haha. Awesome chapter!
joyouki (Chapter 17) - Thu 27 Sep 2012
SWEETNESS OF EVERYTHING HOLY!!! OMG THIS WAS JUICE JUICE JUICE!!!! THIS STORY HAS SO MUCH TO TELL I HOPE YOU MAKE IT A VERY LONG LONG STORY!!!!
Azumii (Chapter 17) - Thu 27 Sep 2012
Oh. My. Gallifrey... YOU owe ME new underwear Sandreline Moon!!! :P I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story and have from the start. Keep up the amazing work! xoxox
Azumii
Excellent!!!
About time they got together!!
Phyllis (Chapter 17) - Wed 26 Sep 2012
Oh. My. GOD! That was AWESOME! I KNEW something would happen, and you didn't disappoint. This is hands down one of my favorite stories on here! Can't wait to see the results of this tryst. Great job!!
awwww finally!! great lemony and can't wait for more!! inuyasha is going to be pissed, Toga and Jakotsu will be greatly pleased!! can't wait for more and keep up the great work all around!!
Just go at it, lol. I loved it!
Saholia (Chapter 16) - Tue 25 Sep 2012
OOOHHHH Is he gona be poppin her cherry??!!! LMAO! Can't wait for your next update ;)
=O I. CAN. NOT. BELIEVE. YOU. DID. THAT!!!!!!! So now I hope you realize that you need to update and SOON like later today or tomorrow possibly lolz.
joyouki (Chapter 16) - Mon 24 Sep 2012
HOW COULD YOU STOP ALL THE LEMONIE GOODNESS OMG!!!! HURRY UP LOL
joyouki (Chapter 15) - Mon 24 Sep 2012
OMG complete juice...Loved that Sess overheard about being a virgin, and how he reacted...I can just hear his voice....D LISH
I love your story please update soon..I was waiting for these two to get together already.
Ya just had to stop there!
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