I like the story. It is good, however, I really don't understand with all the wealth that Sesshoumaru should probably have had as a Lord, why is he living so middle class? I mean, if you're going for a different aspect on his life, then, it's understandable. I mean, it is your story after all. I just figured he would have prepared for the future, but maybe, he's explained in future chapters or this is just how it is...he's average. I'm always pleased with your fics, as always, they are very good. :)
I'm doing a reread, and enjoying it so much. :)
I'm not sure if anyone has pointed this out but I thought you'd want to know. In this paragraph I think you mave have misused condone.
"Your brother is - was a good person. He was always welcomed here and I trusted him with my daughter's life." Even in his last moments, Inuyasha cared about Kagome. "I know why she is doing this. She doesn't want to burden us." She sighed. "While I do not entirely approve of her reasons, I won't condone her choices. Kagome is free to make her own decisions."
The way it is used I believe you are saying that Miyu will not condemn or critisize Kagome's choice. Condone means approve, however if I misunderstood what you meant by the sentence I apologize.
JoLynn (Chapter 27) - Tue 08 Mar 2016
So...I'm smiling like an idiot. YAY!! Great chapter love. Well worth the wait! See you next time, okay?
Happy writing!
Kinsei (Chapter 27) - Mon 07 Mar 2016
I'm sorry to hear of your loss - I hope things start looking up for you. Thanks for updating - I so look forward to the next chapter! All the best!
Susi8 (Chapter 27) - Mon 07 Mar 2016
I'm sorry for your loss. I know how painful it is to lose love ones and I hope your pain lessens greatly as time goes by and you continue to bless us with your stories. It's truly great to see that you came back to add a new chapter to this captivating story. I love where it's going and the positive little changes of attachment in their rocky relationship.
Loveyaa (Chapter 27) - Sat 05 Mar 2016
Nothing like a pregnancy to bring people together. I wonder who will break down first, with all the little prodding. Good for Kagome though. I can't wait to see what happens next :) and don't forget to take care of yourself first.
Ah, ive missed this story! Ive missed you too author. I hope better days come for you ; stay positive!
Rinku (Chapter 27) - Thu 03 Mar 2016
I don't leave reviews often (I know, how terrible) but I was compelled to this time. In one sitting I read your entire story and now, I am hopelessly invested. I've dealt with a partner and parent having cancer. I never thought, considering they were dark memories, that I'd ever feel comfortable or strong enough reading a story like this. But your writing, characterizations and how you handle her illness made this a read I could not ignore, even for my heart's sake. Thank you for writing this and I look forward to reading much more.
The calling (Chapter 27) - Wed 02 Mar 2016
Yes another update!!
Just received the latest update and thought I should catch up. I am so sorry for your loss dear and I hope that the rest of the year helps you heal and treats you gently.
Minime (Chapter 27) - Mon 29 Feb 2016
Welcome back! Great chapter. Great to see Kagome taking baby steps to recovery.
Didie (Chapter 27) - Mon 29 Feb 2016
Very merry welcome baaaack, Maddie-san!
Couldn't believe my eyes first, but it was there! The new chapter! And I excitedly read it with misted eyes... I really really miss it very much...
I'm sorry for your loss, you have my condolence.. I didn't know, but I knew something was up that made you late to posted the new chapter... At first I had this fear.. You posted the last chapter as somekind of present to my belated birthday... I felt like jinx you.. hahahaha...
The more than one-year-awaited chapter is so...so... oh I couldn't utter a single word.. It is so...so there.. all there.. all the emotion, his and her frustation, hesitation then you end that with their not-so-little kiss! Wow.. just WOW...
Congratulation (and good luck) for continuing this story, Maddie-san! I really hope you get your writing drive there! Wish you all the best!
mandy (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Feb 2016
So bittersweet! I really enjoy your writing style. This was nicely emotional and portrayed an accurate "in character" sesshomaru. As a fanfictiin author that is one of the hardest things to do with his character (Lol). Great job!
Saiya (Chapter 27) - Mon 29 Feb 2016
So Sweet and Funny!!!
Ankita (Chapter 27) - Mon 29 Feb 2016
I m glad you updated i was really missing this fic and loved this chapter both are getting somewhere i just wish sessho would open up more anyways this chapters development made me hopefull please please update soon T_T :) n i wish that you get back your writing drive nonetheless we will be patiently waiting for you :)
This is great! I'm so glad you're back and I'm excited to read more.
Oh Maddie, thank you so much for updating, despite your hard time. It really made my weekend bearable. I just lost my grandpa yesterday and was with him hours before he passed. So, thank you for updating and taking my mind off my grandpa; it really helped. And I'm sorry for your losses, but I now understand your pain. Stay strong, darling.
-Katt
This is my #1 favorite sess/ kag fiction and I would like to say thank you so much for writting it! I could literally say that you are one of the most amazing writers on this site ! I hope u find the inspiration to continue to write this magnificent story!
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