Awwwww! This has to be one of my top ten best Sesshomaru / Kagome stories I have read.
Yay! Great story from beginning to end. I guess what I liked best is that you wrote a story that flowed so naturally. There was drama but you didn't resort to long, drawn out angst -- you inserted nice moments and well-timed reveals. I love angst in stories but angst with no end or no relief is just so tired. I don't like feeling like a hostage when reading fics...but that's just me. I hope to read more Sess & Kag fics from you (soon). Thanks for writing!
Ty (Chapter 12) - Thu 24 May 2012
Very emotional piece, almost made me cry at the end. I love happy endings though.
Miyukiyama (Chapter 12) - Thu 24 May 2012
Ughhhh!!! Your story hit me right in my feels! Loved every chapter of this story and I hope you're already starting another. Will definitely be looking for more from you ;)
Wow the last chapters gets me teary eyed! so beautiful u are so amazingly talented! I will be sure to keep an eye out for you and your stories!:) I love how the story has depth!
Such a fantastic speech and such a bold and awesome gesture!!!! U SHOULD WRITE POLITICAL SPEECHES! amazing chapter, i could totally see this as a scene in a movie. PERFECT!
Tiffany (Chapter 12) - Thu 24 May 2012
Amazing story.... You have spoiled us readers with your magnificent writing. Can't wait to get something else from you. Hopefully soon. ;)
I want to thank you for this wonderful piece! I think you did a wonderful job creating a short yet full story. It was an extremely satisfying read, and although it had its good measure of MA material, it was not shallow, superficial, or empty at all. Though I do like ze smut, sometimes I get left with this unsatisfying 'wham-bam thankya ma'am' feeling. Very enjoyable storyline, too, and sends out a really good message. I look forward to reading other works from you in the future :)
kewl just kewl
carmMeldoll (Chapter 12) - Thu 24 May 2012
Love this story, the happily ever after is one I wish were present in today's society, the bottom line acceptance.
FayeMegan (Chapter 12) - Thu 24 May 2012
Yaaaay! Great story!! I hope to see more of your work soon.
Phoenix89 (Chapter 12) - Thu 24 May 2012
That was a wonderful story :) I enjoyed reading it from chapter one all the way through. Look forward to more stories from you soon.
Pricila (Chapter 12) - Thu 24 May 2012
Awesome! I'm glad that it all worked out in the end.
I loved the way this story was written. And I'm not going to lie, the end of chapter 11 was unexpected but by far one of my most favorite moments in the story :D
Toni (Chapter 12) - Thu 24 May 2012
*goes up to the mic* I JuSt WANT TO SAT THAT THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST TORIES I EVER READ! *drops mic and walk off stage*
Brianna (Chapter 12) - Thu 24 May 2012
Best story ever! I loved every second of it! I hope you make more stories!
Such a great story. Love how well written it is. It tells a good tale without being overly dramatic or so detailed that the reader gets lost. (I gotta figure out how to do this) :)
I'm sorry to see it come to an end.
Little Mama (Chapter 12) - Thu 24 May 2012
So cute! And an ending. So rare lately. :P
Thank you. :)
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