I think I have read this before! Omg I teared up a bit like he was talking about racial issues. So beautiful
Lovely! I can feel every emotion, the doubts, the embarrassment, the desire between the two, EVERYTHING! Now that's what a story should be like! I love this, it almost doesn't even matter how it ends, I just love stories that make me feel , and actually have a tone.
this story was sooooo good. i finished it in a matter of hours. the lemons were devine(mmmm):). im new to your fanfics, but if they turn out like this one i will be looking for more of you stories. i liked the way it was in an alternate universe. having them as adoptive parents was a nice way to go. even inuyasha wasnt so bad in this story. once again, great story and i look forward to seeing more from you. c'ya'
Just re-read this story for the 3rd time~ It's very wonderful. I love the chemistry you have crafted between my two dearest characters. Especially chapter four ;D
I will be back to read this again.
Raynell (Chapter 1) - Mon 03 Aug 2015
I read your story on AO3 and I loved it, so I was thrilled to find you on Dokuga. This is one of my all-time favorites. I hope you will keep writing. Cheers.
Literary Fan (Chapter 12) - Tue 13 Jan 2015
Short but excellent story. You have a great writing style. How I wish you had more published stories. Thank you for this wonderful story.
So I started this this afternoon and it was over too soon! I loved it. So original and enthralling, I couldn't get enough!
That was one of the absolute best stories I've read in song time. Kept their personalities just changed the basics that were nessisary.
totally in love with this story. . and oh what a beautiful ending. . i really hope for another story. . maybe until next time.
Miyuki (Chapter 1) - Sat 20 Jul 2013
This is a really well written story and has a plot, which I´ve never seen before. I love how grounded and "normal" the characters were, no false or annoying drama or childishness. Usually other writers make Kagome really annoying or more immature than she ever was in the manga even if they make her older age-wise so I´m glad that you let her act as her age or didn´t turn her into a Mary-Sue. I also liked that there were no character-bashing at all. It´s one of my favourites now, thanks for writing and sharing.
Ennui (Chapter 12) - Sun 31 Mar 2013
That was a truly fun piece to read. Thank you so much for sharing!
I loved this story when I first read it, and I love it even more now. Thanks so much for taking the time and making the effort to post it here on Dokuga. I can't tell you how much I appreciate you sharing your hard work with all of us!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
I want to go back to lurking but before I do, I want to say that I thoroughly enjoyed your fanfic. It was beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Ezriee (Chapter 12) - Wed 10 Oct 2012
Wow...I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed this story! I loved how the relationship between Sesshoumaru and Kagome began, the story behind Inu and Kagome, how Youkai were the ones hiding, and how Sesshoumaru came out, giving his fellow demons courage to come out as well...It was great! Rin and Shippou...well, they were just adorable...and I think you did a pretty good job of keeping ALL of the characters in character even in the AU setting.
Excellent work and I really hope that you write more in the future. I used to be a big DS9 fan. Thats actually where I began reading fanfics many many moons ago. I will have to check out your other fic.
Again, wonderful job and keep it up!
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