My dear Knight of Disorder:
That was a truly beautiful piece. You managed to convey so much in such a way that makes the reader feel everything. And from someone raised up by hippies in the 70's? Far Out, man! Peace!
The lemon wasn't force and not so overly descriptive that it made you feel dirty for having read it. It was simple but just enough to get the point across.
I loved how you used Kagome's power to create a pair of fangs, giving her the ability to mark Sesshomaru as well. Neat trick.
Great job with this. Now to read some more of your work. If they're anything as good as this, I'm in for a loooong day.
Z
i really enjoyed this story... ive thought bout writing a story where kags smokes pot but i didnt think i could do it lol good job i really like the idea of kaagome in feudal era smoking pot and then gettin banged by sesshomaru lol great work
OMGGG I loved it! There's no more? Really. Sadface. I really loved it thought it made me want more i could read as much of this story as you could put out, i personally think it was a fantastic idea, something i haven't really seen on here and it was also written very well, congrats dear :) <3
-MoR-
Suka25 (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Apr 2012
OMG!!!! That was great!!!!!! very good. ~*Dragon*~
TKE (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Apr 2012
WOW...she had one hell of a night!! love it, great job!
*sigh*
I wouldn't mind this kind of relaxation... Not at all!
Awesome shot! Great work!
Ok slim on my phone and re-read the last bit.... I have to say I'd love to see more of this even of was only InuYasha finding out but not being mad bc of kagome's purple haze. Plus what if weed made super puppies. Really laid back ones. Besides I can totally see Miroku breaking some ones mind bc hes high.
omfg so awesome! love this!
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