I'm a little put off by Sesshoumaru saying it is 'too early for Kagome to remember their first fight'. When someone has amnesia, and begins to remember, it can happen in different way. It can come in pieces, or it can come all at once; it can come in order, but more often than not, because they are only pieces, they come out of order. The patient may remember things from two weeks before first, and then suddenly have a vision from two years ago, and then two months ago. There's no order to recalling memories.
I think you could play that up a bit more, for the sake of realism, and throw a wrench into their relationship a bit more for Kagome to not remember in order. I understand you are doing it chronologically for the sake of telling the story, but it would be a new element for you if Kagome remembers something horrible Sesshoumaru does, and only later recalls what happened before.
AWW! So CUTE! This story is just so cute! I am really loving it.
lol
he's such a tease!
great chapter! Update again soon!
:D
~Starfyre
Awe, he' seducing her! how sweet! lol!
that would be a memory no female would want to forget!
~Starfyre
Diane (Chapter 85) - Fri 22 Feb 2013
Like these. Have a slight correction though, you have titled at the start of the 1st sentence, it should be tilted.
I am loving where this is going! Thanks for the multiple update! Please keep them coming! :D
What that's it?! More! I must know how this memory ends!
Smooth Sesshoumaru... very smooth.
Pfft. Inuyasha was nuttin!
How very un-sesshoumaru like, and yet... so fitting ^_^
I can just feel the tension mounting between those two.
Hopefully Kagome has a positive reaction to this memory!
Kagome you naughty girl!!
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