I really hope you continue this and they end up in relationship...a long one.(I can't help it, I love happy endings in FF. Especially since they are few and far between in reality.)
Wow, such incredible detail. I'm surprised you haven't just made this a series - it seems to be open-ended and I wonder if you'll delve deeper into their non-relationship. It seems Sesshmaru's beast wants her - why does he seem almost hesitant?
Anyway, awesome work, this and 'In a Can' were enjoyable :)
I think I like this one better than the last one, I love how Sesshoumaru treats her so lovingly and realizes he's being romantic later...lol. Why does he move below her? Anyways I really enjoyed both stores and I cant wait for more.
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