I was trying to wait until the end of the story to comment but this is batty as hell and not in a good way
Ah, so happy they are. 0///0
I guess Im happy for them ^^
O_O
Hmm... Tea...tea lady...
Tea...lady...the tea...
This was a nice meet up chapter. Everything is flowing nicely
Hmm...I wonder what will happen...
Scaryyyyyyy
0_0
Ah, so nice :)
And they doom themselves...and dont notice... :/
This will be interesting...
I feel she forgot about 'his satisfaction ' part...
Hmn...I wonder...
First I just have to say you're an amazing author! It was very interesting to see Kagome portrayed so differently. I liked it she wasn’t meek or docile! I was reading this last chapter on my phone and lmao your lemon was too much for it!! Made my Iphone crash! Very amazing story thank you!
alright i am intrigued. bring it on!
Lumi (Chapter 7) - Tue 15 May 2012
You have a knack for creating an interesting story, but the numerous grammatical errors and jumpy sentence structure make it a little hard to understand at times. A beta would likely solve this issue.
Zara (Chapter 12) - Wed 09 May 2012
This is a very different fic. Very different from the normal kagome/sesshomaru type of story and I love your creativity. I think that you ran through this story very quickly and when I finished reading chapter 12 it didn't feel at all like an ending. I wasn't sure what would feel like an ending however because I'm not sure what the story was working towards exactly. Overall your unique story is to be commended, and I think with just a little expansion it could be even better than it already is.
Zara (Chapter 12) - Wed 09 May 2012
This is a very different fic. Very different from the normal kagome/sesshomaru type of story and I love your creativity. I think that you ran through this story very quickly and when I finished reading chapter 12 it didn't feel at all like an ending. I wasn't sure what would feel like an ending however because I'm not sure what the story was working towards exactly. Overall your unique story is to be commended, and I think with just a little expansion it could be even better than it already is.
licious (Chapter 12) - Thu 26 Apr 2012
I loved this:D It was freakishly dark in it's own special way. Insane and intense I had to read it all the way through so im very sory that I haven't stoped to review any chapters before this:D The pace seemed a bit rushed in some parts, but it still somehow added to the whole mentally unstable effect. Great job, imma go check out your other stories now:D
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