Something is afoot...and I'm loving it. More!
this is adventagious. Kagome in her own way has truely made, or more so is making her own fate. deviated from the path, to me i see this as a way for her to guide and chagne things that need to be changed, mending,corrected so that the future, in it's whole as she once knew it may never come to pass. I say that in the meaning that the earth may not be dying so, and the lands not so tainted. This, even with a fate such as one who walks the path of time itself, is amazing. This story as always is so well told, and fasinating! I'm so horribly addicted to it :3 it's perfect! i only need MORE!
I cannot wait to see what you hold in the future for all. @_@ ♥
Why do I have the feeling that there is a new 'puppet-master' not liking the way fate is directing things and trying to stir things up? I can't wait to see how Inuyasha and Kikyou fare; not so well I hope, especially since Kikyou killed Miroku 10 years ago. Something needs to done about her and soon, VERY soon. And I knew Orochi and Sango were going to be mates. I'm sure wherever Miroku is, he's happy for her. More please.
oh very nice! I like that Kagome's some how managed the hardest one, it seems like something she'd do one way or another. though i do hope all ends well for her and Sess. Not the death of a physical kind eh? that kinda sounds like a spiritual death, maybe some foreshadowing to a beast/human shifting from one being into 2? or possibly a dead miko finding life? either way I'm excited and can't wait to see more! - r0o ^_^
PS - glad the idea's helped!
New enemies... but...Naraku is not dead yet...or is he? :/ Maybe he's killed in these next chapters? It would be amusing to see Kagome bring his head as the 'prey' she hunted :D
Hm. A month has passed, the kitsune arrived and she has yet to find/think of a gift. It's great that she's doing all this and that, recovering her memories and life...but I fear something will happen. I like that she and Satsuki seem to be getting along.
This was good. Friendship builds slowly :)
Hn. I like how Kagome approached the situation. Sadly... I dont know what Senshi is... :/
OMG! D: This was amazing!
About the name of the arc...maybe it could be related to 'Soul' since there's so much related to it. Perhaps, it could be something like: Rebirth of a Soul, A soul is now free, The barrier is broken, The Soul of Instinct... =_= This is so complicated...Maybe translate one of those to french or italian or spanish or japanese...
Japanese:
instinct: honnou, jinsei, chokkan, insutinkuto
soul: kontan, kihaku, kon, reikon, hitokage, konpaku
I've never done this before, like...actually search for a name for someone else but...here's a link to a ehrm interesting site I found. Stages of a Soul: http://csp.org/chrestomathy/five_stages.html Maybe you can use it...if you plan five parts :)
So, I am now going to read... I have a lot of chapters waiting :)
Lol! Hmn...this story has the neccesary and balanced amount of drama, action and romance :3
Kkyo...Kikyo.I wonder what you plan...
| So complicated. I like it
| Poor Shippo. He must have been so scared
| Stalker !
| Hn. Kagome is blind... But i like how shes adapting :)
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i'm sad that this is the end of the updates for tonight, worst that that happened to Miro. BUT BUT BUT. I can't wait for the hunt. the lemon was awesome and well done. I cant wait to see the next arc!
As for ideas: well there's the obvious, sango/Orochi pairing, pups for SK, the hunt itself. Not sure who or what the next villan will be. I think maybe inuyasha should beat on kikyo, b/c miroku didnt do anything to them, so he's got to know that was a low blow. Like at first he could be high on running only to realize what she did, all the things said, what she's really done. but still stck with her b/c he's an idiot.
I think maybe you could have kikyo find a way to REALLY become alive in the hopes that she'd be a power like kagome, and inuyasha help her but their relationship change from him being submissive to her, and it being the other way around. Maybe you could have inuyasha's beast play more of a role, after all kikyo, not alpha female, harmed pack. It could well up and realize that SHE was the one that wanted them to wish it away 50 years ago. It could also be plotting to get kagome back, and kill off Kikyo.
Power speaks to power, so maybe the beast of inuyasha could find a awy to shead it's human soul, leaving jsut a demon, and a human inuyasha, leaving kikyo to fend for herself against it...
Maybe Miroku cold be reborn as something that coems after inu and kikyo, maybe a ghost, after all, fate is cruel to free him from Naraku's curse only to have him *spoilers* in the end. Either way, I'm liable to give you another whole plunnie if i keep going. so hopefully some of that helps! - r0o MORE! ^o_o^
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