I'm really enjoying this story so far, but these Tokugawa chapters are a bit much. I highly doubt that Sesshoumaru is that much in love to be lead by Kagome, especially since she knows far less than he does with her lack of memory of the future. Your version of Kagome is pretty nice. No tears, no draining emotional outbursts and she has manners, for the most part. I'm not buying the Xena warrior princess mixed with Sesshoumaru's persona slant you gave her.
He may as well not even be in the story since everything he is/was, you gave to her.
omg... i'm so sad that there isnt more to this story yet!!! lol. you ended it on a lemon! a cliffy lemon! nooo! i hope you continue this eventually. this is the first time i've read a fanfic where kagome is like this!!
Tasha (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Oct 2014
Don't mean to sound rude or anything but there is a small and I mean small mistake near the end of chapter 1. You accidetally put an s in place of an a in Kagome's name.
wow that was an epic tale to read.
great job
I still love this story.
lashon (Chapter 35) - Fri 20 Jul 2012
I really like kagome being all bad & ruled by instinct! it works really well on her, i love this story! it was really good! Im glad sango didnt end up being lonely
Nyuka (Chapter 35) - Wed 13 Jun 2012
What a great story, I think I prefered Ark one...mostly because it stayed with the plot more, the random scenes from else where while entertaining made me loose focus in the second Ark. Over all I loved the story and I'm glad I got the opertunity to read it. You mention a third Ark to the saga, I look forward to more pleasing works of Dokuga literature by you. Thankyou
Nyuka
LOL! He hid it for nothing! :D
I like how they are getting along :)
Tokugawa... hn. Kikyo... hn. I wonder what will happen with them...
>_> Sorry for taking so long to read. :sighs: I should be back here now :)
Did I forget to mention that this was my favorite chapter so far? Now Inuyasha gets to experience what Kagome when she was cursed. Nice. It looks like Susanoo has forsaken him...maybe. I can always read and re-read this awesome chapter.
ALRIGHT! Finally some pups for Kagome. I love it. More please.
:3 i rather like this it's brutal but it's perfect!
*chuckles madly* this is spectacular! love it!
0o0o0o0o0o yanno, with the info in this chapter, you could have it so that demons (once the time comes that they go into seclusion) start stealing human children with any miko/monk/priest power, to help keep the demon population strong, and pure. a new race of "human demon" raised along side demon kind so that they are no different in the end. It could be a way to always have fresh blood, and a way for them all to fall into "myth and lore" @_@ that could be while kagome's never heard of any REAL miko before in her time.
Demons could be waiting at hospitals for their births, and eventually claim that the child died in birth, so that the human family doesnt even have reason to look for them. some illusions for maybe a week or so, and none are ever the wiser. @_@ *wiggles update bribery c0okies at you MORE!
AWESOME!! *claps with glee* DING DONG, THE BITCH IS FINALLY DEAD! YAY! I wonder what punishment Tsukuyomi has in store for the unfortunate hanyou. I have a feeling that temple is in the Moon Kami's hands now. Some Kami Susanoo is. He didn't give his 'son' not even an inkling of his power. I can't wait to read more.
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