Im quite confused w the plot and story to be honest it's a bit heavy for me I didn't understand the character motives at all or why was sesshomaru abusive if u could explain it that would be great
I'm satisfied with the ending, although, I would have liked to see more. Your OCs were great, too. Loved it and it was just what I was looking for! Thanks for sharing :)
Even stubborness must have a limit, but I guess no one bothered to inform Inuyasha about it.
Ouch! That must have hurt a lot more than a sit command ever would lol.
Poor Sango. She must have had the shock of her life hearing Kagome talk so casually about what's been going on.
Now, that's what good friends do; cover up for you with minimal questions asked.
I've got to say I like it that she showed some backbone. She also seems much more comfortable in his presence now. Calling him fluffy like that lol.
Interesting chapter. Hm, so she really submits because she wants the pain that comes with his embrace on a deeper level, not just because she wants him.
Nice starting chapter! I especially liked how she mirrored his stripes in the guise of bruises and marks caused by their wild coupling ;)
love your stories can't wait fot the next updates :)
I really enjoyed this,it was great but I feel at a loss....I want more!! It's as if certain details, major characters, curious issues and questions were forgotten or left unanswered after the battle with Naraku.
Is there a possibiliy there will a sequel that will tell us: what happened with Sango & Miroku?, if Shippo went with Rin (& S & K) as they left the battlefield & if so,did he stay with Sessh after Kagome disappeared ?, what happened to Inu & Kikyo?, how long was it for Kagome between the time she was taken from her pups to be returned to the future & then reunited with her pups & Sessh in the future ?,what/why was she so powerful,while fighting Naraku when even her eyes became demonic red & in the future is she still that powerful & still Sessh's mate?,what was the inner voice Kagome heard(that Kagome described as having 2 of herself)within her head & Sessh felt she was communicating with,something similar to his inner beast)Kagome heard that pushed her to go to Sessh,take a chance & etc..?
When Sessh 1st came upon Kagome,he described her blood as smelling full of absolute bliss, fresh strawberries marked with the want of a demon bitch in heat.
It mentioned Kagome changed physically:her hair black with hints of blue,her eyes the color of gleaming brandy & her scars and markings from Sessh held either the color of his magenta stripes or the blue of crescent moon.
This was great & I'd love to read more.
i LOVED this fic! I'm giggling! thank you for making a dark kagome and keeping hre that way! LOVE this!
awe D: !!!! i'm so sad for her!
i so love this! and omg thats so amusing to have her tug on his hair to bring him to her level, LOVE THAT!!!
Please updated more, I want to know what will Inuyasha do when he know Kagome be pregnant. Please make pov Sesshoumaru tp know what he think
i LOVE this, i think the only thing i would recomend would be clarification on who is talking, sometimes it's clarified by actions so it's not that bad, but sometimes it's confusing, specially between same sex conversation, like kagome/sango talking it was a bit confusing at some points. either way i LOVE this. I'm totally reading allt his in one day! part of me, would like for there to be some sort of romance, even if only a little. i wonder also if kagome will become a youkai in the process i dunno i rather like tih sand want more.
wow. I sort of saw that coming. Surprised he didnt pup her earlier if they been at it 3 years. I love this.
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