I really enjoyed this,it was great but I feel at a loss....I want more!! It's as if certain details, major characters, curious issues and questions were forgotten or left unanswered after the battle with Naraku.
Is there a possibiliy there will a sequel that will tell us: what happened with Sango & Miroku?, if Shippo went with Rin (& S & K) as they left the battlefield & if so,did he stay with Sessh after Kagome disappeared ?, what happened to Inu & Kikyo?, how long was it for Kagome between the time she was taken from her pups to be returned to the future & then reunited with her pups & Sessh in the future ?,what/why was she so powerful,while fighting Naraku when even her eyes became demonic red & in the future is she still that powerful & still Sessh's mate?,what was the inner voice Kagome heard(that Kagome described as having 2 of herself)within her head & Sessh felt she was communicating with,something similar to his inner beast)Kagome heard that pushed her to go to Sessh,take a chance & etc..?
When Sessh 1st came upon Kagome,he described her blood as smelling full of absolute bliss, fresh strawberries marked with the want of a demon bitch in heat.
It mentioned Kagome changed physically:her hair black with hints of blue,her eyes the color of gleaming brandy & her scars and markings from Sessh held either the color of his magenta stripes or the blue of crescent moon.
This was great & I'd love to read more.
i LOVED this fic! I'm giggling! thank you for making a dark kagome and keeping hre that way! LOVE this!
awe D: !!!! i'm so sad for her!
i so love this! and omg thats so amusing to have her tug on his hair to bring him to her level, LOVE THAT!!!
whitemoon (Chapter 14) - Sun 19 Feb 2012
Please updated more, I want to know what will Inuyasha do when he know Kagome be pregnant. Please make pov Sesshoumaru tp know what he think
i LOVE this, i think the only thing i would recomend would be clarification on who is talking, sometimes it's clarified by actions so it's not that bad, but sometimes it's confusing, specially between same sex conversation, like kagome/sango talking it was a bit confusing at some points. either way i LOVE this. I'm totally reading allt his in one day! part of me, would like for there to be some sort of romance, even if only a little. i wonder also if kagome will become a youkai in the process i dunno i rather like tih sand want more.
wow. I sort of saw that coming. Surprised he didnt pup her earlier if they been at it 3 years. I love this.
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