I was hooked by the time I finished the first chapter. :D The second chapter gives us an insight into what Kikyou and Inuyasha's feelings lie, about Kagome. I'll be waiting for future updates.

Ah! Inuyasha you ass! Are you really THAT blind that you didn't realize that she's been freakin' miserable? Or do you really care about your own happiness more than hers? This story is starting off great! I can't wait to see Kagome go back to her old self and have Sesshoumaru be happy with her. ^_^ I only have some questions of clarification: Was Kagome still a virgin until Sesshoumaru took her as a mate? And I think you implied it, but I just want to be sure, Sesshoumaru and Kagome had been together already right? I ask these two questions because if the answer is yes to either or both of these questions, you could play up the "Possessivness" theme even more between the brothers. Maybe have Sesshoumaru stick it to InuYasha *evil grin* That'll teach him, though don't have Sesshoumaru throw it in his face, that'd be distastful, have InuYasha smell Kagome on Sesshoumaru when they fight and little the wheels in Inuyasha's head start turning hehehe, he'll be so pissed. Kagome and Sesshoumaru deserve each other. *nods* :D

inuyasha in this story is a low ground dirty dog, and i hope he gets a real beat down. the story is amazing, to say the least. please update soon:)

This is getting interesting....I want more!!!!

This chapter was good, but a little sparse on details.  Why are the servants the way they are; how was Kag settling in?  What did Kikyo do to drive a wedge b/n Inu and Kag?  Don't take this as a flame, it is not -- I'm just a little confused (which is normal for me, so it could just be me).  keep the updates coming!

more more more! i like this story and am excited for what might happen next:D

I cannot wait to see Inuyasha reaction to Kogome having a mate, and Kagome's reaction to being thought of as a backup mate. I really like this story

Such a good story.  Angsty.... but not too much.  I love how you have written Kagome's feelings all over the place.  Like she's trying to pull out of a depression. Makes me want soooo much more.   I hope you continue to update.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Excitement! GLEE! More please!

I like this but it needs more, like what happens when Inuyasha gets back.. Lots more that you could write and I would love to read it.

I'm really liking this one. I do hope you decide to add to it. It has much potential. Thanks for sharing!

Yes!!! Oh my gosh!  I want to read moreeeeeee pleaseeeee!!!!! You cant end i there!!!!! There needs to be  moreeeee!!!!

Yes I want more! lol Does she become his mate, does inuyasha come after her will she change from a miko to a demon/miko? what happens that is a major cliff hanger lol don't leave us hangin'! lol

It's a good start.  I would like to see this continue into a fully blown multi-chapter fic.  I find it interesting the way you are shaping Kagome's character --it's almost like she's switched places with Kikyo (w/ regard to her dead eyes and need to touch, etc.).  It would be interesting to see how Inuyasha and Kiyo's relationship developed/develops juxtaposed with that of Sess' & Kags. Please update soon.

You could alwaysbring in Inuyasha and Kikyo's reaction, and a glimpse of Kagome's life in The House of Moon, how she recovers from her pain and you know.....

Poor Kagome!!!!  Really tugged at my heart...

There's only one chapter, but I adore it already! I can't wait for the rest of it to come up c: keep up the good work <3

i'd like to see more of this! like inuyasha's reaction, their mating, and sesshomaru goign after inuyasha and kikyo. their brutal ends and maybe kagome's easy acceptance of it all, their first pup too! maybe even inupapa could rise from the grave to take inuyasha so that in death he could teach him what he couldnt in life, for his NEXT life as obviously inuyasha wasn't the best at learning.