For your first fanfiction, this is pretty damn good. The ending was a little rushed but, like you said, its your first.

Honestly, I loved it and I hope to see more from you. =3

i LOVE this! Squealy kagome is always good!

You did an awesome job on this fic......I hope to see more work from u in the future!!!!!

Killer ending!  You have to keep writing and publishing your fics.  I had no idea that this was your first published fic.  And it rocked!  I hope to see what else you can do. 

AWESOME!! I loved every single word of this story. Hmm, I can only imagine what happened between Inuyasha and Kikyou after they were essentially banished from the Western Lands and returned to Edo after all that, especially after Inuyasha learned of Kikyou being Naraku's little whore. Perhaps, he told Kaede of Kikyou's sleeping with Naraku and rejected her as his mate. Or maybe Kikyou was kicked out of Edo. I wouldn't be surprised after Inuyasha bitch-slapped her. Yep, I thought she deserved that too. Ooo, the possibilities. Despite Sesshomaru having some respect his little half-brother, the half-brother deserved what he got. 

I am seemingly surprised. This fanfiction went by rather smoothly and quickly. The first, ever, that I have known to be updated and finished in, correct me if I'm wrong, almost two days. Thank you for being quick and efficient in putting up the chapters. It was a pleasure to read this story, and I hope you continue to write more, in the future.

Such a good story.  Can't wait for the finale'.

Nooooo!!! The next chapter can't be the last one!  But if it is, you have to start a new fic immediately.  Good chapter, but one section was a bit confusing.  It was when the maids and guard came to Sess' study, and you said that Shippou was there, yet then all of a sudden Sess was talking to Miroku.  Anyway great story, wish it didn't have to end so soon.  Update quickly, though.

excitement! seriously! LOVES it! i do think though, that inuyasha should be banished from the west, for giving such a traderous gift to the new lady!

OMG.....I'm gonna have a heart attack waiting for the final chapter!!! This story is awesome!!!!

Oh man, its gettin better and better!!!!

More, please!  And quickly, please!  Ooohh I hope Inuyasha and Kikyo will come to some bad ending.  Will they? Please?  I'll bribe you will virtual peeps!

seriously LOVE this fic, i really hope that kikyo and inuyasha get their come`up`ence!

awesome, another chapter!!!! I would sooooo love to see Inu and Kikyo put in their place!!!

omg omg omg! i can't wait for the next chapter! i'm super impressed with u posting 3 chapters in such short time! great story~!

Good chapter...I can't wait for more. 

Alright I am confused. Are they mated or not? It seems like it but we have not seen it. Are they mates to be?

Fabuolous! A new chapter! Terrific job I can't wait to see Inuyasha try and retrieve Kagome! Oh, yes I can't wait!

i'm so excited to see this as a chapter fic! it's really taking my mind away from pressing matters ^_^ thanks!

Oh my!! please tell me you're going to write another chapter1 I was Inuyasha to see Kagome happy! I want him to try and take Kagome from Sesshoumaru! Oh yes, I so want to see that! I want to see Sesshoumaru kick his selfish ass all over the western lands! Please! Pretty Please! Great story!