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KyraTekak (Chapter 35) - Tue 27 Feb 2018

Hope for more updates 


Cheyanna (Chapter 35) - Wed 17 Jan 2018

Awesome! Can't wait to read more :)


iin (Chapter 35) - Wed 17 Jan 2018

Thanks a lot for 3 updates....worth it to wait 1 year...he..he..I like the plot and your kagome's portrayal.  


iin (Chapter 35) - Wed 17 Jan 2018

Thanks a lot for 3 updates....worth it to wait 1 year...he..he..I like the plot and your kagome's portrayal.  


iin (Chapter 35) - Wed 17 Jan 2018

Thanks a lot for 3 updates....worth it to wait 1 year...he..he..I like the plot and your kagome's portrayal.  


Koree (Chapter 34) - Fri 12 Jan 2018

Kagome is definitely growing with Sesshomaru the little things count , great chap 


Misunderstood Maiden (Chapter 33) - Thu 04 Jan 2018

Finally caught up. saw this bad boy and decided to hold my comments till the end. I like the story. Never before have I felt so conflicted when reading a story. The desire for a female to be in power verses the oddity of when she actually is. She was saying that males can be stubborn ect. in a way that females typically weren't but that could of been her rage talking because history has shown that women could be just as faulty as men. Especially when they can lead and do it through manipulation of the male in power. History has shown time and time again the strength of an intelligent woman, scorned woman as well as women with a purpose. It seems this story portrays her in all those lights so it's so interesting. As for Sesshomaru, that is interesting in itself. I had never felt much pity towards him as I did when he was held captive in the first chapters. It was amusing and odd at all times. I was like, "No!! Don't embarrass the man!" and at the same time was like; "Well why he so shocked when it's something expected of women on a daily basis but that does not make them any less." 

Sure I felt that Kagome took it a bit too far borderlining slavery wiht the cuffs on em and it was somewhat smoothed over by the ability that they were more or less "free" but yea... for story purposes, I see why it done. Idk if I could write all of my thoughts but this is too long already. Overall I like the story a lot and am impatiently waiting on the update!


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 33) - Thu 04 Jan 2018

Woo woo. Another update nice!!! Can't wait to read more.


Mrs_Sesshomaru (Chapter 33) - Wed 03 Jan 2018

Omg you have NO idea how I literally squealed & freaked out when I got the update email for this!! I went back a few chapters to refresh a few things. Just know I LOVE this story & you are so awesome for continuing it!


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 32) - Sun 31 Dec 2017

Interesting story. I've become captivated. Any moment I could spare I spent reading. Took me three days but I finished! Can't wait for your next update.

 

A part of me doesn't want Kagome to have the baby... but the other side of me is interested in seeing how the story progresses and how you use your literary skills to convey and weave a compelling tale that plays on the reader's emotions. I loved the confidence Kagome oozed in the future. I anticipate how her development comes about. I'm almost impatient to see the transformation. A part of me wants you to skip things and get right to it... the other side wants you to take your time and allow the transformative period to come naturally. With Sesshoumaru's involvement though, I somewhat fear she won't be the same... which is the goal... you intend to make her happy... but will she be just as strong? I'm partially curious to know what happened and how she developed in the other timeline where she was partially secluded save from Jiniji and Rin.

 

Keep up the great work!

 

-Kendra


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 9) - Sat 30 Dec 2017

Oh my gosh that chapter was just amazing!!!!!!!!!!! I love love love the reactions and banter!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 8) - Sat 30 Dec 2017

Wow what a chap!!! So many interesting things happening. I love it!!!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 7) - Fri 29 Dec 2017

Miroku! And son???

 

hoolllyyyy crap. What will Sesshy do now?!?!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 6) - Fri 29 Dec 2017

Hmmmm very interesting!!!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 5) - Fri 29 Dec 2017

Way. Out. There. Mannnn. Awesome!! Absolutely loving this! Soooo many quuestions that i need answered!!!


SammyJams (Chapter 32) - Fri 29 Dec 2017

I gobbled this story up! It’s absolutely amazin! I can’t wait for more!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 4) - Fri 29 Dec 2017

Nono onononono 

 

not shippo! Nonononono. :-(

 

 


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 3) - Fri 29 Dec 2017

Oh my my my!!! PLEASE tell me that someone somewhere drew a picture of Kagome with that bow and exposed chest! Must be an absolutely stunning visiua!

 

anyways, great chapter! I love how she was able to think through that all and perform like that but now drop from the exhaustion! Such an incredibly strong Kagome!


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 2) - Fri 29 Dec 2017

.... I love this story!!! While I do definitely wonder what in the world could have caused such a change in Kagome... I like it when Sesshy is dominated! Makes me all hot and bothered hahaha. 


Roseanna (Chapter 22) - Fri 15 Jul 2016

Looking forward to more updates on this story.  I really liked the alternate universe, and now how Sesshomaru is going to deal with things now that he's back.  Keep writing! :)


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