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Nicole (Chapter 24) - Sun 09 Mar 2014

Well, that helps explain why Kagome was willing to trust Miroku and Sango again afterwards; they really did try to track her despite the chaos you described around them. If the scents are throwing off Sango and Miroku, then they must be hell for Sesshomaru (at least that's kind of what it sounds like).

Good luck Sesshomaru, I have a feeling you're going to need it!


Ankita (Chapter 23) - Fri 28 Feb 2014

Noooooo. It can't  stopppp here I neeed moreeee plz plz plz update


beachvilla (Chapter 23) - Thu 20 Feb 2014

Can't wait for the next update. crossing my fingers that things will work out some how. 


Nicole (Chapter 23) - Wed 19 Feb 2014

Whoa. This story sucked me in this morning and didn't let me go all day! I think you've done an amazing job, especially in your portrayal of how Kagome reacts (and is still reacting) to her ordeal: no quick and immediate healing, and she is at war in her own mind over how she can act, react, and feel. She is also incredibly honest about how Sesshomaru's plan may (or more likely not) go down, and what it's affects may or may not be. Given Kagome's thoughts on the topic, and my own thoughts on time-travel (and how Sesshomaru's beast has acted at various points in the story (see #2 below)) I wonder if Sesshomaru will end up back in the past, unable to prevent any part of Kagome's ordeal, and will come across her at Rin's - just as he did before - and he (or his beast) will have the exact se reaction, leaving the future unchanged. 

All that being said, as I read I became curious (or perhaps confused) over a couple of things, and it's possible that they've only occurred in the story due to the time frame over which it has been written:

1. During the two months that Kagome was captive, where were Inuyasha, Sango, Miroku, Shippo, and Kirara? Any or all of them should have had the skills to track her and help her. I find it surprising that Kagome would be able to keep Miroku and Sango so close over the long term when they hadn't been willing (able?) to help her then. The fact that it took Inuyasha so long to turn on her (and that she apparently trusted him until then) is surprising, too. I hope that I didn't just bypass that explanation in the story, though I did go back and look at Chapter 12, when Kagome tells Sesshomaru about the past...

2. The wishy-washyness of Sesshomaru's beast. When they converse, he often goes back and forth (in different chapters) on his willingness to take Kagome as a mate - in either the past or the present. Is that deliberate? Does Sesshomaru's instincts really that confused over what he wants?

 


Suka25 (Chapter 23) - Mon 17 Feb 2014

NO I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


satuross (Chapter 23) - Mon 17 Feb 2014

An update. im so happy. sobs T_T


Mrs_Sesshomaru (Chapter 22) - Tue 10 Sep 2013

Smortz... Have I told you I love you lately?! LOL Yeah, I'm late reading the update but WHOO what a ride!!! Yayness :-) Eagerly awaiting the next one.  I wonder what Masanori is planning...?  He cannot think a frontal assault will work.  And yet, with the ending of this chap - can Sess bring himself to leave her?  Surely not, knowing the danger she's in!  Saving her in the past? Yeah, ok great. But Kags in THIS time is who owns his heart.  And not only leaving Kags, but Rin too... OMG so many unknowns!


Alii (Chapter 22) - Wed 04 Sep 2013

Oh shit he is going home asap!! What what! Yeah! Please updat soon!


LM Bluejay (Chapter 22) - Wed 04 Sep 2013

Hooray for updates!! Looking forward to future chapters!  :-)

You've got me really curious now on  Masanori's backstory. You'll indulge us desperate readers with more info on him...ne?


mari (Chapter 22) - Wed 04 Sep 2013

great update loved it.


satuross (Chapter 22) - Wed 04 Sep 2013

but but.... seshhy have to mate her first before he goes back right?!

 

that means we get lemons in c23 right? right? finally right?

 

btw, since both seshhy and kags seem to be able to fire laser of deaths that takes out mountains, shell have no problem even in this time line


Seraphina Dragon (Chapter 21) - Sat 13 Jul 2013

i hope to read more

 


LM Bluejay (Chapter 21) - Wed 03 Jul 2013

This really gets me wondering if Sesshomaru's true goal is going to be from serving 'love' to mastering it. ;)

Another great set of chapters as usual.

I humbly await more! :)


mari (Chapter 21) - Wed 03 Jul 2013

loved the update.


Alii (Chapter 21) - Wed 03 Jul 2013

She is going to be chaotic! Please update soon I love this story(:


~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 21) - Wed 03 Jul 2013

Miroku and Sango should understand Sesshoumaru's point of view. For him, in his culture, mating is as far as it goes when it comes to love, no? But then again, Sesshoumaru himself might be oblivious to the fact that he is already in love with Kagome, or else he wouldn't worry about her and care for her and follow her orders and pleasure her and want to mate her and want to be with her and be jealous of the people in her circle of trust. No?

Those are my thoughts... But perhaps there are things unknown to me that will play future roles in the story that might make Sesshoumaru fall in love with Kagome if he already isn't.

Dunno...

Anyhow! I loved the update.

Absolutely amazing.

Keep it up!! I'm glad you're back :)

xoxo


Arrieon M (Chapter 21) - Wed 03 Jul 2013

Yes!! I love this freaking story!!!! XD

So many feels for Kagome right now and Sesh is still a bit naive

So can't wait for the next update!

keep up the great work :)


Loveyaa (Chapter 20) - Mon 03 Jun 2013

Well look at Kagome laying down the law. I wonder if she can fantasize about Sesshoumaru's plan and hold out hope for it. I can't wait to see what happens next and if they go through with the plan :)


Alii (Chapter 20) - Sat 01 Jun 2013

I thought Sesshomaru was going to join her in the hot springs...(; please update soon!


mari (Chapter 20) - Sat 01 Jun 2013

loved it thanks.


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