This story is beautiful, all those reading my review please read this story. You will not be disappointed I promise. I am an honest reviewer, I give criticism too when needed. But this is a beautiful tale. I hope all my reviews does not offend anyone. I tend to review alot when I really get into a story, well that's not 100% true cause sometimes I get lazty and just review at the end. So apologies.
Im reading the start and I cannot resist commenting. Wouldnt it make sense to tell Inuyasha why Sessh left so he could tell Kagome? The Elders law no longer really holds up. This is a hole in the story, 2 weeks keeping the Demin from his pup? And she didn't even really know what happened, but Inuyasha kidnapped her, got people killed and she forgave him way sooner. It makes no sense especially since she Taku kept telling her have faith and being as sensible as Kagome is, I do not see how she dosing think, "hmmmmm something just isn't right." This is what Im getting from the way Kagome is portrayed I take her to be more understand and wise. Hiding the child doesn't seem like something she would do without the facts.
I can understand her pain but it is ridiculous to hide it. I do not think this would happen realistically speaking. She might have said tell him I do not wish to see him. As for The Great Lord Sesshomaru I can't for the life of me understand why he would let the elders go this far smh he could have tild Kagome n have her keep it a secret. This is the same thing that annoys me about animes in general. The fact that this is so much like an anime is actually pretty cool. But yep still annoyed, peeved even. But woa I felt her anger. I wouldn't let him come an inch near me. But if he decided not to go I think I would be even more upset
Ah I remember this chapter with the child of Sesshomaru. I was moved by Kagome's emotions in this one. Ooo that power flare was good, I didn't feel like it was over dramatic which I typically do. The writing style made it seem natural, like yes this is the way The Lady of the West would eact about her love and her title. Very good. I seen why I couldn't help reading this tale again. There's always a twist waiting right around the corner. Also the morning Lime was well worth the wait.
One thing I must say about your works is that they often move me to tears at times. Inukimi, I felt Kagome's sorrow towards her in law.
This make no sense why would he block her out after knowing Inuyasha is now part of the east and there were spies?? Chances are he would think she would be in danger . So him blocking her really doesn't make much sense at all. Kitt you have made me depressed even if I know how this ends. I love your writing obviously or I wouldn't be reading for a second time. But since I read it so long ago I can can see thing with a fresh perspective, and I think so much could have easily been avoided (the mom's death, and Kags could have said she is already married)
This make no sense why would he block her out after knowing Inuyasha is now part of the east and there were spies?? Chances are he would think she would be in danger . So him blocking her really doesn't make much sense at all. Kitt you have made me depressed even if I know how this ends. I love your writing obviously or I wouldn't be reading for a second time. But since I read it so long ago I can can see thing with a fresh perspective, and I think so much could have easily been avoided (the mom's death, and Kags could have said she is alreadt married)
This chapter uhhhh, it just seems unrealistic that the great mother of Sesshomaru would perish, I do not care how great the army was. And tou know what it feels kinda useless that Kagome Sessh, Inu and Taku fought these things before and didn't at least train or inform the west soldiers of their fighting style and such. They are at war with creatures that out number them and they saw what they could do. There is nooooooooo way the west or any defending army would let their guard down. For Pete's sake they even went through the effort of getting Kags and the group to fight, you would think they would be more cautious. It just seems like the writer may have been looking for any opening to cause drama and suspense because she may have thought the story was lacking. If there was a great war with west vs east on a grand battle field and Kagome got to show her stuff it would have been better than having them fight in the east castle later like I remember frim the first time reading the story.
I think ive read this I remember the felines and such. But wow this story is just so awesome right now. Worth reading again
Liz (Chapter 46) - Sun 20 Dec 2015
Such a wonderful and epic story! Thank you for writing this. Happy Holidays!
Liz (Chapter 17) - Thu 17 Dec 2015
Love it!
Liz (Chapter 17) - Thu 17 Dec 2015
Love it! ????
Well hell if that wasn't one of the best Damn kagSess fic I ever read.
I'm an old school kagSess fan I remember reading this story years ago and I loved reading the ending now and re-reading your editing. I couldn't help but feel like I was 16 again ( yeah I'm an old lady now ) watching Inuyasha for the 1st time. I have been reminiscing with Dokuga and reading new and old stories and yours is the only one I have reviewed ! You absolutely have talent and I hope that you have plans to use it! With how easy it is now to self publish you would be great ! Thanks for still being a KagSess fan
Just found your story and read it through this wass epic. Very well written and exciting. Thank you it was a pleasure to read.
Ankita (Chapter 46) - Wed 09 Dec 2015
Loved the epilogue. ... i evenn re read the whollle story from chappter 1 i was so invested in it even though i was reading it twiceee i m glad that akito is dead -_- thank god hahaha no thank you for killing him hahhaha
After you ended the story three years and four months ago, I excited to see to you written a epilogue to it, on the same date you ended it. Which was August 8th a Wednesday and today is December 8th a Tuesday, that is so weird and cool! I'm glad because this epilogue was beautiful and amazing as the last chapter!!!
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