i felt so incredibly conflicted, reading this story!
it was rather an odd combination of love/hate.
on the one hand i love the beginning (love-developement) but i hate where you went with it. why would you torture kagome so much? why that extra kick in the nuts at the final ending? why letting her have a bloody miscarriage (no pun intendet). she gets almost raped all the time to keep the plot rolling, than that betrayel from inuyasha, the attempted murder of her pup AND SAKURA. Seriously? S. leaving her vulnerable with his pup? That doesn't deserve such heartfelt forgiveness and she feeling GUILTY? come on.
Above all: WHAT is the deal with the hole forgiveness thing???
it's like you keep violating a perfectly good story to extract every bit of drama you can get.
don't get me wrong i read it all in one go and how i said it's love/hate. i properly wouldn't even write this review if you wouldn' t have had have a missvarriage in the end. after i read that i just thought 'REALLY? REALLY? EVEN NOW?'
i don't know. i feel strangly unsettled and mad at everything reading this. it's like TOO MUCH TO SOON, TOO LITTLE TO LATE. If you ask me that would be an amazong title for your story. but then again i liked the start.
I feel thw need to inform you that this story is the reason I missed my 9:30 class on Tuesday. It is also the same reason I am up at 4:20 in the morning reading knstead of sleeping the day before a math exam. And the reason I had two hours of sleep on Wednesay. Let's leave it at this: I am happily sacrificing my sleep and well being for this story. Ever seen that picture with the cat with a huge, crushed burger in its mouth thay says, "I have no regrets?" Yeah, well....I REGRET NOTHING.
Kitty (Chapter 45) - Fri 13 Sep 2013
I really loved this story. I read it all in one go because i just couldnt find a place to stop where i didnt feel on edge for more.:)
The only thing i would mention is in the epilogue. By the end one hundred years had passed, and while there was a bit about losing Rin, i find it a bit strange that Kagomes family are not mentioned. Personally, i would have had something about her family passing on too.
Great story though. Thanks for taking the time to write it.
Kitty.x.
I love this story. It had everything, but what happend with the twins did they kill the person that killed their mother?
t (Chapter 16) - Sun 14 Apr 2013
i love this story and i cant wait to see what the bonding ceramony is!!!!! :) when will it be up??
awesomeness!! loved it!!
MidNigh (Chapter 45) - Mon 07 Jan 2013
Its been a very long time since I enjoyed a fanfiction this much! It was awesome, thank you for sharing it with us!
What a lovely story! I couldn't stop reading it, and I am sad that it is over! T^T
So I have been reading this and omg. I love it so far!! I have to say tho, I reeeeeally wanted Sesshoumaru to come through the well and kick Akito's ass. I mean. Really. xD Little f'er trying to make her do all that stuff D: Pissed me off! xD
I will be reading the rest of the story in the coming day... yes I have no life but reading awesome fanfics x3
I loved this story so mcuh! It's so well written and I really enjoyed that you didn't rush the two together. I love it when authors do that, and you did it so well. :] Props!
Msole93 (Chapter 45) - Sun 02 Dec 2012
It makes me sad that the story ended but happy that it ended well. The kids are all grown up. *sniff* *sniff* Kagome is a grandmother now.
I love how you wrote this story in its entirety and at how you tied it up nicely.
......wait........... .... ..
Akemi was the one who found the purple stone that kagome gets in the future for Hogorokkotsu????????? I just realized this. How does it get into the hands of Kagome's ancestors? mind twister (slightly) here!!!!! The cycle of the stone is never ending????
If the answer to the first question is yes then I love that little mind twist, if not then disregard the questions that follow it but know that I still love the story and will still (in some place in the back of my mind) think that that is what it is.
Either way I LOVE IT ALL!!!! Thank you for the great story! It certainly drew me in and made me feel the experiences that they went through, both good and bad. Through your writing I got to experience their triumpgh and their near defeats as well as their contentness with the way their life had gone up to the end of the story. All in all, excellently done.
Bianka (Chapter 45) - Tue 27 Nov 2012
OMG I LOVE THIS SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE O AWESOME!!!!!!!! :D
Anonymous (Chapter 15) - Fri 02 Nov 2012
hi i just wanted to let u kno, if u didnt already, that alexandrite is a color changing stone. in the candle light it is purple and in the daylight it is green amosr like an emerald. i work with these kind of stones so i know about them. i really enjoy this story but i just wanted to point this out.
AlphaDemoness (Chapter 1) - Sun 30 Sep 2012
You know what I really dislike about Sesshomaru/Kagome pairing when Inuyasha has to be the bad guy. He has to be crass and slow, like he never had to survive like everyone else. I mean where's his maturity and growth?? Then you have a Sesshomaru that can eventually see the logic in a worthy human, but not the half human brother that manage to survive without him all those years and he still couldn't manage to kill. If you want to keep everyone in character so much then how about if Inuyasha has some development too JEEZE! I have always shipped Sess/Kag before I even read inu/Kag and I still prefer Sess/Kag, but I've also read Inu/Sess and they seem to flesh out the character of both brothers alot more. I mean some Sess/Inu had me bawling I mean BAWLING my eyes out. The General, Sess actually kills Inuyasha and I mean in freaking cold blood after YEARS of abuse the most in character portrayal of ALL the characters I've ever seen. This isn't so much a rant at you but I guess at people who seem to drop the ball when it comes to Inuyasha. It's just not very realistic that after everything Kag/Inu have been through even with the whole Kikyo thing that he would just be antagonistic towards Kagome. You don't literally put you life on the line for someone repeatedly and not care about them, love them, even if it's not romantic, even if its just instinct. He is still human 1 day a month, I would think alot of maturity and contemplation happens during the time when he can't suppress his human emotions. To each own I guess this was the last straw for me. But reading different pairing even if you don't agree with them you see different things. Like maybe Kagome was a bit immature at 15 growing up in the modern era and suddenly having power over someone so much more powerful than she is. Maybe the whole SIT thing can be a sort of abuse. That was something I never considered in over a year of reading purely SESS/KAG fanfiction. But this also makes finding really good stories incredibly difficult. Ignorance IS bliss.
AngelHeart2122 (Chapter 45) - Mon 17 Sep 2012
I loved this story! I will have to read your other stories.
Black-Inu (Chapter 45) - Sun 16 Sep 2012
Awesome story!! I admit I almost gave up on it twords the middle but you pulled it off epically. Ill be looking at your other stories.
jen (Chapter 45) - Wed 12 Sep 2012
totally loved ur story. this is the best i've readin a long time.
awesome work i love it, your story is amazing
i love sessho+kagome pairing. . make it more please XD
A very nice finish, I rather like it. It will stay a favortie and I might read it again some time.
Squash/Inumiko (Chapter 45) - Sun 19 Aug 2012
I loved it from start to finish! Kagome is strong and you really relate with the struggle she faces to come into her power, as well as what's given to her. You play on many possibilities I wish the series would have considered, fulfilling some of my fantasies in a way. So I want to think you for that.
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