Very interesting concept and a good start. I like that you added Sesshomaru's mother in the story, can't wait to read more!!
Oooow, a new fic! Seems so promising!
I liked your characters, and I'm happy SessMom is on board, she's awesome!
I wonder why Sesshoumaru is no longer the general... Jaken and Rin are good, it's nice to see her a little grown up. Inuyasha is being annoying, it seems that Kagome matured, but not him.
Great start, I'm waiting for more!
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