The ongoing battle is really well done and I have to wonder if Sesshoumaru's plan is a distraction within a distraction.

Good work in building up the tension for the on coming battle, very nicely done.

Now this was a really heartwarming chapter, I really like how you did them confessing.

First congratulations on the Gold! Now for this chapter you got me very curious as to what Sesshoumaru is up to. I like seeing his tactician side coming out.

I like the new villain of yours and the really cool intro you wrote for him! Also good work on how the characters show through his illusions.

Bloody love how you wrote Sesshoumaru's reactions to Naraku's jibes. And the holy power scene between Kagome and Sesshoumaru was very touching.

Seeshoumaru's and Kouga's fight was well written, the two of them fought very in character. I like how you have Sesshoumaru softening up to a point but nothing over the top.

Nice talk between Kagome and Sango, and I actually laughed out loud over Sesshoumaru's actions while eavesdropping on their conversation.

As for chapter length I never have had a problem with them, though sometimes short they are all choked full of vivid descriptions and actions that make them seem longer, in a good way, then they really are.

Now the ending of this chapter was just plain cute! You are really creating a lovable and believable pairing here!

Forgot to add that it was a very touching scene with Sesshoumaru and the bento!

I like how you wrote Kagome's trip home, though would've love to have seen her telling her mom about needing birthcontrol... ;)

Glad to see Sesshoumaru back to being attentive towards Kagome.

Poor Sesshoumaru, having such troublesome thoughts. You’re doing amazing work with how you are writing the characters growth in this story. And I like that it’s not all sweetness and sunshine between Kagome and Sesshoumaru, but instead their growing relationship is full of ups and downs that reflect their personalities very well.  

Yelp you did a great job with Jaken, it's somethign I can easily see him doing. I hope you have Kagome visit home to turn out interesting to say the least...  ;)

Sesshoumaru has a new eye color... green!  ;)   Cool chapter and good work in creating such an interesting side character. You fleshed out Akimitsu very well in just one chapter.

Having so much fun reading the antics between Sesshoumaru and Kagome as they grow closer together. Really wondering what you got planned with Naraku!

Wow talk about a very heated and sensual chapter. Again really enjoying how realistically you are building their growing relationship.

Oh bloody good chapter. Again you got the people acting very in character and I like how the brothers are kind of getting along and the reasoning behind it.

LOL... now this had some really funny moment sin it. Again you are developing their relationship at a nice pace and I like how Kagome is growing bolder/more confident in how she is handling the two brothers.

Oh very nciely done. Just love Sesshoumaru's reasoning and how you had things play out back in camp.

Oh Kagome is starting to set some rules of her own and he's listening... really nice development!