this is getting oh so interesting!! its pleasing to read the changes that is going on in sesshomaru. can't wait for the next chapter so more progress will be revealed. so moar plz ^_^
Awww!!! He's possessive! so cute! Update soon!
~~HAHA! SO cute!! :3 Loved this chapter, can't wait for more!
Midian (Chapter 16) - Tue 05 Feb 2013
It was a great surprise to see this updated. Welcome back.
That was so sweet Sesshomaru possessive, he needs to to stop denying his feelings about Kagome, keep it coming.
Fubuki (Chapter 15) - Wed 26 Dec 2012
If he thinks her bleeding time is fertile, there is gunna be a baby soon!
Please keep going, I am thoroughly enjoying it
how creepy of naraku! yuck! other than that absolute love of the chapter despite it being your rewrite. :P hope to see more!
Naraku is sick for watching them have sex, keep it coming.
What? Nooo! It ends, and it was getting so good.
.__.; I'm completely hot and bothered by the end of this chapter.
I just saw this fiction for the first time today (I didn't realize you had a sequel to the first)! Anyways, it's exciting and very hawt. And, I'm happy you didn't make Sesshomaru the romantic/fluffy type. I always imagine Sesshomaru to be the dominant, powerful, and and agressive type -- which is what makes him so sexy, and so irresistible. Bad boys are always hot!
I can't blame Kagome for being scarred! That is really gross, being watched like that. But on the other hand, maybe what Naraku pulls will just make Sesshomaru take another step closer to wanting Kagome more then a bed partner!
Zoe (Chapter 15) - Mon 12 Nov 2012
I am so in love with this story, it is moving at the perfect pace, mostly because of the lemons I think! Not waiting forever for them to at least kiss, and not just jumping into "oh my darling, I have loved you forever and will never leave you!" keep up the good work! Makes my week when I see that you have updated!
Love it! Can't wait for the next one:)
Andrea (Chapter 15) - Mon 12 Nov 2012
I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to seeing what naraku is up to!
Pricila (Chapter 15) - Mon 12 Nov 2012
Oh no, it was great; I loved it!
Midian (Chapter 15) - Mon 12 Nov 2012
Thankyou for the update, another great chapter.
dianne (Chapter 15) - Mon 12 Nov 2012
I don't know what you're talking about, this was great!
I want Sesshomaru to be my teacher! XD
god i love this fic! re-written chapter or not this was awesome!
loving it!
Awww I wonder who will cave first. It'd be cute if it were Sesshy. >.< I hope he would know before Naraku acts. 0.0'
update soon! Yay!
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