LOL... Inu sure grew up. I always picture him, in my stories I mean, as a bit mean, most times an asshole, possibly a jerk and very few times a true friend. But you made him out to be such a sweet puppy that I can't say no to him right now.
This sequel of yours is getting interesting. I mean, the main story was really cool and steamy - to the point that I re-read it XD - but this one is even more fun to read. I'm expecting, after every line, more action between the two. I wonder when you will make those chapters :-? I really want to read more from you.
As for the mistakes and negative things you might expect... I haven't seen any. Maybe at the beginning of the forth chapter... you forgot some letters and misspelled one or two words. It's not evident enough, but I thought I should tell you.
Make more love for the two not so willing characters XD I want more dirty sex!!!! *i'm on a sugar rush XD*
*waves hands madly* moooooore!!!
Lots of love and inspiration: Lory!
Nice to see Inuyasha acting mature! He sometimes behaves like a prat, but on the inside, he's really a sweet guy.
=]
Now, as for Sesshoumaru's proposal on last chapter... I'm not sure if Kagome should accept it. Looks like the perfect recipe for heartbreak. It's an offer for sex, no strings attached, but the problem is... for a romantic girl like Kagome, there's no such thing as no strings. She'll end up in love with a guy who wants only sex. I hope she realizes the danger...
Anyway, great update! I'm waiting for more!
Thanks for the chapter. ( : Hope you have a great nap.
Katsura (Chapter 3) - Fri 21 Oct 2011
I like this a lot so far :)
Kanna37 (Chapter 3) - Fri 21 Oct 2011
Yay! Everytime I see your name come up I get all warm and happy inside... looking forward to more!
Amber
1carinoinu (Chapter 3) - Fri 21 Oct 2011
Good stuff and love how Sesshomaru continues to seduce in his own frustratingly dominant way. Will Kagome give in to the temptation or will she hold onto her beliefs? Soooo tempting! I'd hate to be in her loafers!
Great news, a sequel to Good Enough to Eat! I loved that story!
I wonder how Inu's reaction to the news will be... Hope Miroku and Sango are right!
I'm waiting for the next chapter, with Sess appearance!
Fuel is very expensive know-a-days. You know that right? It cost me so much to write this review! Anyways, loved the original, smiled and laughed throughout the entire thing, this one will for surely surpass it, hopefully. lol.
Hi! I believe I read the previous story a while ago because it sounds very familiar! :) And I love your stories! :D I look forward to the next chapter! - Fallen
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