Reviews for Contact by Lillian

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rss (Chapter 19) - Wed 21 Sep 2011

home sweet home....
and mama sweet mama....
mamas always make things better, no?

well co-incidently i had a very lovely and touching mother-daughter moment with my mother just today.....
and i'm feeling so good after it....
all my troubles seemed to have disappeared.....
:)
reading this chapter made me smile again... 
so thank you 
^_^ 


rss (Chapter 17) - Wed 21 Sep 2011

heartaches....
slightly diferent....
but still the same.... 


Tsuki (Chapter 19) - Tue 20 Sep 2011

hm Inuyasha won't be happy - eye roll - love the story! :) will look forward to reading more! now back to my work... -_-; sigh...


Silver Standard Society (Chapter 19) - Tue 20 Sep 2011

Finally, I can leave a review.

 

Was having problems doing so from my phone, where I usally read your story from.

Still loving it. Don't worry about your exposition chapters, they're necessary to help flesh out the potential of your story. No one likes the sudden 'I've fallen in love with you' lines. People want to see the moments and thoughts that led up to the big reveal. You're doing great.

Will be back xD

-SSS


Anonymous (Chapter 18) - Tue 20 Sep 2011

I wonder if she is going to make it home or if someone is going to catch up to her.


GreyEcho (Chapter 18) - Tue 20 Sep 2011

I really like your story. And I loved the comparison of each living in a shadow. Sessh being "The Lord of the West, yet forever the heir." Very nicely put.

 

I seem fun/ trouble coming ahead. >: D Can't wait to see what they say next or the next interaction.


Sora (Chapter 17) - Mon 19 Sep 2011

Good chapter, I liked how he appreciated the view. And I liked that you pointed their similar situation, I hadn't had troubles with understanding the last part of this chapter.
You promised the answer of what in the pocket this weekend! :( You tease! lol


eli (Chapter 17) - Mon 19 Sep 2011

I'm enjoying the story a lot but am having trouble understanding the last 5 sentences of chapter 17. Please explain in an AN on chapter 18. Thanks! looking foreard to more!!


Twist in fate (Chapter 17) - Sun 18 Sep 2011

I wanna know what was in the pocket, good chapter, but I was hoping for answers. Looking forward to the next update.


Fallen0x (Chapter 16) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

hm this is an interesting story! i can't wait for the next update! :) i like it! Kagome is slowly piecing things together hee hee XD


rss (Chapter 16) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

btw whats in the hidden pocket of the LGS?
i hope she dosen't figure out too soon...
i'm currently having fun reading it with him being her mystery man.....
*sighs dreamily*
more sesshoumaru plz??? 
-^_^-


rss (Chapter 15) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

he stole it!!!!
XD
hahahahaha.....
so cute and sooo funny!!!!!!! 


Twist in fate (Chapter 16) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

All I can say is update! I want to know what he does next :)


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 15) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

Maybe it's 'cause I'm not a huge Kagome fan and really only like her for her potential and because with that potential she could be so GOOD for Sesshomaru... but Sesshomaru's chapters are ever-so-much more entertaining! ^_^

...that and I just love different perspectives of 'behind Sesshomaru's eyes' and all that. ;)

Wah! But what does she have in that hidden pocket?!? And will she get the item Back?

I'd ask if she was right about it being green tea, but I've a feeling that will be answered in the correspondence.

Thanks so much for writing!


Sora (Chapter 15) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

Ah, I love it! What's in the pocket? Please, more! 


me (Chapter 15) - Thu 15 Sep 2011

what's in there!!??  don't leave us in suspense! 


Twist in fate (Chapter 14) - Thu 15 Sep 2011

So sorry, forgot I have to use the firefox browser to update and post reviews on this site *sighs*.

Great story I am having a great time reading it, just found it late yesterday and thought it was quite comical. Ironically I was watching the first season of Inuyasha yesterday and not too long after I read it an episode with Sesshomaru began to play. The one where he gets the human arm and jewel shard from Naraku, every time he interacted with Kagome I kept thinking Green Lace panties and would start to laugh all over again.

Fate


Twist in fate (Chapter 14) - Thu 15 Sep 2011

Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 14) - Thu 15 Sep 2011

:convulses in laughter: For once Kagome has it on the nose... but it's too impossible to her to believe!

Thanks for writing!


rss (Chapter 13) - Wed 14 Sep 2011

hahahahaa....

awesome!
;)

LGS rocks!! :P 


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