hehehehe...

Good job. You had Kagome say everything she should, WITHOUt resorting to using Inuyasha's language. Kudos.

Thanks for writing!

This was....horrible. I wonder what'll happen now... tsk tsk GO SIB GO!!!!

lol Poor Kagome! And I bet Sesshomaru won't really like this guy! XD

Sharp eyes?  Maybe GOLDEN eyes by any chance?

Gotta love Hojo.  So kind and caring....and clueless...

hate mean people!
~_~ 

I know it was mean but I was an English major before I switched so that teacher is hilarious. Poor Kagome and all but thanks for the chuckle, it made me miss my essay days.  

I'll be back!

(And I'm happy your liking CT) ^_^

-SSS

Yikes! Talk about the teacher from Hell...Poor Kagome!

I suppose she'll be saying something to her "mystery" pen-pal about this, eh? I can only imagine how that correspondence will go *wink*.

I think it's amazing what you can do with so few words--bravo for squeezing so much emotion into such a short piece!

Keep it up!

... no ... really?! Hahahahahahaha! If it's what I think it is you have some fun scenarios to play with. I can't wait!

Oh. My. God.
is it who i think it is?
YAY!
but wait...
he is in the fudal era being her mysterious pen pal... isn't he?
so nothing happened between them back then?

You, m'dear, have just gained yourself a stalker.

This is beautifully written and wonderfully put together! I love the way you've so obviously thought about how you want this story to play out, and the way you portray the internal thoughts of the characters is fantastic! I've always wondered when someone would point out the imperfections that Sesshomaru would have, and you've managed to do that flawlessly.

Excellent job, and keep up the magnificent work!

~Aubrey

....maybe she should have llistened...

=]

Evil spirit!

...so sad and true. Never thought about it this way...

:gasp: KAgome! You can be fooled by riches!

gah! Evil youkai! Dont break it!

RIght..... unless lili is the author and so could be very normal xD

:Blushes: how can he do that?!

lol didnt she think he could have been there spying on her? xD