Looks to be a good story, interesting so far...I would say be careful about grammar...I noticed a lot of words that sound a like, but have different meanings like Hear instead of Here, or mispelled words like Mad instead of made. Soon instead of son. I can't wait to read more chapters!
Azumii (Chapter 1) - Sun 26 Jun 2011
Really like where this is going. I can just imagine the things Kagome will to do to ensure the salon isn't so serious. :D Keep it up!!!! xoxoxo
Hello!
I just wanted to tell you I think that your idea is very interesting, and I usually don't read incomplete series' but I actually look forward to seeing what you come up with 8D
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