Nice chapter, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
Good took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Serena (Chapter 21) - Thu 07 Nov 2013
so it seems i have reached the last chapter (so far).... cue my restless anticipation for the next chapter!!! pls update soon, im kinda, very, extremely in love with this story :)))
Serena (Chapter 16) - Thu 07 Nov 2013
this is so depressing !!! why am i reading this?!?............*clicks next chapter* >:)
Serena (Chapter 5) - Wed 06 Nov 2013
hahahah i love the title for this chapter & Mmm cowboy sesshomaru? me likey
Major late, but great chapter. Keep it coming.
rose (Chapter 20) - Sun 16 Jun 2013
next chapter please
Amazing story, keep it coming.
I adored this chapter very much.
I saw no errors in that chapter so itheads been beta approved... Great job bringing Souta in hat was very creative. I can't wait for your next chapter
There were some areas where the wording was bit awkward and seemed like some wors were missed. Overall I loved this chapter, especially the sweet part between Sessh and Kag.
Is Kagome going to tell Sessh about the child that lived or is he going to find out somehow? I really like this story and can't wait for the next update
Yay! things were explained! I'm curious now about her relationship with her father
I'm a bit confused, so I understand she lost her child in the accident but did she also give up a different child because she couldn't handle it or is it something elese. Another thing I'm confused about is , a couple chapters ago when Kouga brought up her dad, it said she knew he knew that she didn't like bringing her father up but when her dad calls shes happy and excited? I really like your story, i'm just a bit confused
YAY! Im so happy your back! This story is progressing nicely. I cant wait for more.
Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 17) - Mon 02 Apr 2012
I'm a little confused. I thought Rin was the little sister of Sesshormaru ( ch.8 says sess needs to get a present for his little sister Rin) and but in the last chapter, she's the daughter? Also in the last chapter u mention Sara is the fiance and then also that she was the wife, so which one is it? and you also mention that the "Last time he pushed away his feelings he lost someone important to him" ( ch. 13 , but from the last chapter, I think he shows affection, I mean Sara is her fiance and Rin's mom right? and he's frantic to get her to the hospital, and they seem like a happy family. So yeah, I am confused about these things.
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I see that you have another update ready for us. ( ; Thank you! I wonder who Sesshomaru visited ? Perhaps his mother, or his daughter? Hmmm...gives us something to think about. ;)
This was a nice chapter but did you make a mistake because didn't the baby die from the accident?
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