Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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JeniNeji (Chapter 95) - Wed 06 Jul 2011

I absolutely adore your descriptions of how everything happens! It flows so well...like Magic!


Smittee (Chapter 94) - Wed 06 Jul 2011

lol. Seeing Sesshy in my head showing her around, he all of a sudden work a coat and monocle. XD I'm not sure why. Great scene though.


sugar0o (Chapter 94) - Wed 06 Jul 2011

lmao he's got a HALL of cursed swords? *is amused* so interesting!


sugar0o (Chapter 93) - Wed 06 Jul 2011

so cute that displeased puppy! and the world shifts in a new light, suddenly she's wondering if there was ever truth, and the real questions are, "was there?" and "how much was slanted by Inuyasha's version of 'the truth'?" brilliant. and i lave that rin's all >:l Sesshomaru -sama!


Smittee (Chapter 92) - Tue 05 Jul 2011

Lots of learning was before Sesshomaru then.


REDWOLF (Chapter 92) - Tue 05 Jul 2011

Very well done!


JeniNeji (Chapter 92) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

Wow, this seemes like a night before christmas almost. The spirits come to impart their wisdom. Interesting visit and I am very much awed at your creativity in Sesshomaru's background story.


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 92) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

Nicey nice. Want to see how things have changed between Sesshomaru and Kagome. Hopefully, some lovey-dovey stuff. More please.


sugar0o (Chapter 92) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

0o0o0o0o0o i do so love this fic :3 i love that inuyasha is seeing things he never would have before.


sugar0o (Chapter 91) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

*eyes glazed over* i loves you! this is awesome!


sugar0o (Chapter 90) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

If you use one of the guys, maybe they can show inuyasha what kagome went through when he wasnt paying attention, what she gave up like how her family is now, how much they trusted inuyasha, and now he's tried to kill the person that he was ment to protect -nods-


sugar0o (Chapter 90) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

0o0o0o0o0o!!! i do so love this :3


Lillian (Chapter 89) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

You could always go to the back ups: the kami. Ya know. Or you could pretend that Kaede's dead, and have her take him in hand. Or have an OC.

Or we could have somethign random, like a talking tree.

Nah. Those scare me.

 


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 89) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

I... LIKE that: that he has earned their loyalty to such a degree. Especially considering they likely miss Yuugao too and are dealing with their own grief.

Sess-mom does bring up a good point though. However... that does not justify her method of training. I do not see how her method of training would enable Sesshomaru to better control 'his inner inu' and believe there are better ways to do so.

Thanks for writing.


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 89) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

Sessmomma has no idea how right she is. Want to see more.


sugar0o (Chapter 89) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

hmmmmmmmm As for Dead peoepl that can advise Inuyasha there's 3 that you could use, 1 would be best i think, and the others maybe not so much...

1. Midoriko - she's the jewel's miko, she more then likely picked kagome, or you could work it in that way. 2. Onigumo - While he was the soul that made up the human sacrifice that became Naraku, he had loved Kikyo. And Kagome is Kikyo's reincarnation. He could show Inuyasha, what life could have been like had he gotten the miko 50 years ago, without all the drama that was Naraku. and finally...3. Naraku himself. I think he'd be a bit more evil about things, everyone so far wants inuyasha to grow up, learn from this. Naraku could possibly make it so that Inuyasha see's JUST how EF'd up he's made things. How much he's broken things with Kagome, and then leave him with the understanding that without her, Inuyasha is nothing.

and good update!


REDWOLF (Chapter 88) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

WOW! I am so HAPPY. there were so many chapters to read :) This is GREAT!


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 88) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

While I'm not HAPPY about Sesshomaru having such a Horrible childhood... I can see how it has made him the daiyoukai at the beginning of your story (as each Sesshomaru in most stories is different). This... this chapter is painfully heart-wrenching. Even though I am glad Sess-mom has experienced at least Some comeuppance. I am glad you made the distinction that Yuugao was a Friend, and not a youthful romantic interest. To me that makes everything surrounding what happened that much stronger.

I am still finding it interesting that we are learning all this about our favorite inu-daiyoukai through Inuyasha learning it. A fascinating approach on which I don't believe I've yet to commend you. So kudos to you for taking this road less traveled. With Izayoi-hime as her son's guide, no less!

I am in advance glad for whatever even small happiness for Sesshomaru you promise is to come. It seems in killing Yuugao he has taken from himself his one light, so it will be nice if he has Something to keep him from falling completely into darkness.

Thank you for writing.


Lillian (Chapter 88) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

I just finished reading the funniest book. No, really. It was quite hilarious. I've never laughed quite that long in one sitting (I read it in ONE sitting, which is why I'm up at 2 AM). It's called The Royal Treatment, by Mary Janice Davidson, and I totally recommend it.

 

This was like getting hit with a hammer. It was really, really sobering. Sesshomaru is in such angst, and you make me understand that he wasn't in control because of his beast, but it's so depressing! I feel like Inumama is trying, in her own twisted, awful, horrendous way, to protect Sesshomaru, but it's not right! Or is it? I just don't particularly understand why she felt he had to be raised that way. Was it because she was raised that way, and that was the only way she knew to raise him, or was it because the conditions at the court of the west were such that this was the best way he could be okay and protected?

Wow. I'm feeling like an investigator. I could write a book! Inside InuMama's Mind: Fiction Versus Reality.

Nobody would read that.

 

Do you like my novel (see above)? *bows*

 


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 88) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

Sesshomaru's mother got exactly what she deserved. Geez, what a cold-hearted bitch. I'm just glad Izayoi is forcing Inuyasha to see all of Sesshomaru's past and how he became the evil yet sexy bastard that he is. More please.


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