Wow! I really am curious how you will write the next chapter. That is quite a difficult siutation you have got there! ;D
I can't wait to find out. Maybe it is something along these lines? (I try to imagine a possible scenario =P)
Kagome - Beet red face, lots of stuttering, mumbling, and runs away!
Sesshoumaru - Quirks the other eyebrow, stares, laughs (Pretty improbably but who knows), smirks, turns away leaving a ahocked kagome.
Nah... But anyways, I really can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
-Karen
XD Really putting her on the spot. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work.
Aw!! He Likes it! ^_^ And he put Kagome on the spot about an answer. *giggles* Of course the explanation she gave thus far isn't the one I would have stumbled through... but then I'm not Kagome.
Thanks for writing!
haruka_101 (Chapter 54) - Tue 05 Jul 2011
Eeep... you were caught Kagome-san! I wouldnt want to be in ur shoes!
Loveyaa (Chapter 53) - Mon 04 Jul 2011
Yay for graduating after only 3 lessons. Lets see if this new trick comes in handy. Though I doubt Sesshoumaru will be able to hide his surprise due to her hug. I can't wait to see all the other surprises in store on this adventure :)
Omg so cute! A perfect momnet between the two! Love it!
Loveyaa (Chapter 52) - Sun 03 Jul 2011
I didn't think it was too mushy. They are becoming closer and it would def be interesting to be inside Sesshoumaru's head to see how he dealt with realizing that he had found a "much more pleasing sight". The upcoming battle/adventure should be quite intersting as well. I'm surprised he isn't worried about the rumors of them traveling together. I can see many opportunities for them to get closer and I can't wait to see what happens next :)
KT (Chapter 52) - Sun 03 Jul 2011
Horrible? Mushy? No! That was the sweetest and nicest and cutest and snugliest chapter I have read in months!!! (Throughout all the fanfiction I have read) ;D
I read it, smiled, reread it, awwed, reread it, thought about printing it out so I could reread it again, reread it, and Ha ha you get the story.
Ah ha! I know the best word to describe it!!! It was adorable! =)
Mindy (Chapter 52) - Sun 03 Jul 2011
I just started following this story on fanfiction.net (screenname: henhito) and then I stopped by here and look at what I found - a whole bunch more chapters!! Wonderful! You just made a unbearably hot desert night into an awesome evening. I'll keep reading both here and there and dropping comments on all the chapters because there were a lot that I just passed by that are begging for comments, a couple of times I had to stop because I was laughing so hard and just had to explain the story line to my husband who was looking at me like I had lost my mind. But, at the same time I can't wait for the fanfiction.net to catch up
As for this chapter (52) - super mushy but not too obvious so I think it's perfect. I think it really matches your story title - it's subtle. And, come on, we love that kind of stuff. As Sess-Kag fans it's the stuff that makes us go crazy, running around the room squealing like a 14-year old girl with a new Justin Bieber poster. But maybe that's just my reaction; I am sure there are some fans out there that are more mature than I and are satisfied with a calm heart flutter. Either way, it's moments like that that keep us coming back for more stories with these two characters. Good job.
haha XD love it! :)
lady_myth (Chapter 52) - Sun 03 Jul 2011
Lovely!
Must. Have. MOAR.
I do not think this is too mushy. I believe that their actions fit their characteristics perfectly. Especially Sess' behavior. I eagerly await your next chapter!
Kanna37 (Chapter 52) - Sun 03 Jul 2011
Nope not mushy at all. Just lovely!
Amber
Congrats on winning! Nice read! AND Oh no! NO Zero! I read it...Im so nervous...is Zero going to kill her now? Cause she bit him? Oh no! Tell me what's going to happen! .;paces around:.
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