Ugh, I would normally leave a signed review but I keep getting logged out every time I click on something :(
I love this fic. I get doubts too when I'm writing my drabble story because it's really easy to let the story run away and go in a different direction than you intended, but I think yours is great!
I remember you saying that the humor would be back soon, which is nice, but I also like that you took a break from it for a while! Having both good and bad really works for this story, since Sesshomaru is so serious and Kagome is so bubbly. They are opposites attracting so it only makes sense that you have both serious and bubbly moments!
:)
Kanna37 (Chapter 67) - Fri 22 Jul 2011
Hey, that happens sometimes. I usually go back and re-read through my longer fics as I write them, so that I don't forget things, leave plot holes, or forget where I was heading with things.
I'm enjoying it, so you're good from here, anyway!
Amber
Loveyaa (Chapter 66) - Tue 19 Jul 2011
And Kagome continues to show that she understands Sesshoumaru. Hopefully she will recognize her own feelings when it comes to the priestess. I mean I can't see Sesshoumaru letting anything bad happening to Kagome/his slave. And now the priestess knows that and knows that Kagome would do the same for her doggie. I can't wait to see what happens when there is another showdown with the witch :)
Kamiki (Chapter 65) - Mon 18 Jul 2011
Uh-oh what's that unsettling feeling? I wonder if she's just a little jealous or if it's her instincts telling her not to trust this woman. I'm a little wary of her myself; she miraculously managed to get away, just *happens* to know exactly where the bad guy is AND is willing to travel with them there?? Hmmm, maybe I'm just too suspicious XD
Thanks for the update! :)
Loveyaa (Chapter 65) - Mon 18 Jul 2011
Hmm...I wonder what that feeling means. Hopefully we won't have to wait too long to find out. Hopefully the big bad witch won't be too much trouble to take down. I can't wait to see how it is done next time :)
Uh-oh, Scoobie! I gotta baaad feeling about this. Anyone thinking things are a touch too convenient?
KT (Chapter 64) - Mon 18 Jul 2011
Really! Another update!!! =) (Lots of big smiles)
LOL!! I love the answer, "He's my doggie." Brilliant!
hmm i wonder what she's going to say!!! i hope i can read more soon! :) love the story!
Loveyaa (Chapter 63) - Sun 17 Jul 2011
I wonder what story she will tell them that they don't already know from the Northern Lord. Kagome learning how to use a short range weapon from Sesshoumaru should be interesting. Im looking forward to it and to seeing what happens next :)
Is Sesshomaru WEARY of giving Kagome a real sword, or WARY? I'm thinking it should be the latter.
This chapter is keeping well to the subtlety of the romance. ^_^ Love how Sesshomaru holds her.
Thanks for writing!
Absolutely adore this fic! Imlove the bantering back and forth! They always seem to say just the right things to one another! Can't wait for more!
Aw.. that was sweet.... in his twisted sort of way. lol that was really cute. I really liek thsi chapter and there interactions. :)
ha such a Sesshoumaru thing to say XD lol well done, very subtle! ^____^ lol can't wait to read more! i hope i can while keeping up with my internship!
Mindy (Chapter 62) - Fri 15 Jul 2011
Nice! But subtle? It might be subconscious but that's definitely witty banter with romanticly inclined undertones. I think they are flirting with each other!! AWESOME!
Looking forward to the development with this new flirty pair... and in the rest of the story ;)
Thanks!
ruhiko (Chapter 61) - Fri 15 Jul 2011
Yay Sesshomaru~~!!
i think it's great! :) yay, Sesshoumaru to the rescue! that was a close one!
Absolutly AMAZING! Keep up the GREAT work! Update soon~! :D
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