The story is great so far! I hope you continue to write this story and finish it sometime...! Keep up the good work! The story gets better and better with each passing chapter! ^_^
Man, Kagome needs to take a Midol, then a chill pill, and stop being such a bipolar drama queen... I guess it makes up for her perfection everywhere else. Two exptremes balance each other out somehow...? Hmm. PMS!!!!!!
WOW so now kagome sees why her brother did what he did, i think that was needed cause it explains alot WOW i cant imagine.....but you did a good job capturing that emotion the brother had written and wrote it well in the story its like i could read the letter myself and felt the guilt, the petrified feeling it was so unreal but good
so please update soon
Interesting. I think I'm in love with this story. I notices a discrepancy in the letter Kagome "wrote". It comment about if Kagome & Sesshomaru ever cross blades, she'll kill him. She already has fought him, and it is never mentioned in the letter. I think that if Sesshomaru reads carefully, he might notice this. I really like what you've done with this story.
I'm amazed with how much this stroy has touched me. The whole thing with Kagome grows in depth and sheer amazingness every chapter. I am in love. With this story I've found a new platform to aspire to. You are up there with RosieB and Arkaidy. I hope one day to be able to write like this.
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