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I started reading this from the beginning again, and realized something very wrong in this chapter. You wrote 2 instances where Inuyasha met with Kikyo, one right after the other. In the first instance, Kagome saw Inuyasha hugging Kikyo, etc., then Kikyo purifies him as he is leaving to go after Kagome. Then, right after that the 2nd incident occurs, where Inuyasha is looking for Kikyo's scent, finds her, has a confrontation with her, and realizes Kikyo is really an inposter. This was all very confusing. Which is the real incident with Kikyo?? Was the Kikyo that Kagome saw an imposter, or the real kikyo? And, was Inuyasha a doppleganger that Kagome saw with Kikyo?? Help!!
Dave (Chapter 30) - Tue 31 Jul 2012
omfrigeng WRITE MORENOW GRASH DARNIT
Dave (Chapter 16) - Tue 31 Jul 2012
isint it te shikon no tama not the shikon no kekara and what does kekara mean anyway
You just gave us an update, and I already want another one. The story is just that good! I hope Kagome fries Naraku's butt and shows everyone just how strong she's become!
Myouga is a vouyer. :P Can't wait to see what Naraku plans next.
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I can't wait to see Sesshy's reaction when he realizes that not only did Naraku kidnap Kagome, but he had attempted to have his way with her. Naraku, Sesshy's going to tear you to pieces. Update soon!!!!
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Well he messed up. Totally should have seen Naraku coming, but I breifly forgot about him, gettingto wrapped up in the two. lol. Can't wait till the next chapter.
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I love this story!!!! XD All the angst and conflict is so amazingly done! I can't wait to see what Naraku has planned for our little priestess. :3
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Gah! This chapter is so bittersweet. It's another update, but it's also a cliffie! The last time Sesshoumaru lost control of his emotions, he made out with Kagome, and before that, his Beast panicked and tried to kill her. I'm looking forward to what je does this time, will he finally realize what his feelings mean?
I'm in love with this story!!!! ^_^ I love the confusion and the attempts to kill her, then save her, then forget her, then kiss her...lol, poor Sesshy, your heart's doing a number on you. I know this was several chapters ago, but I just want to say that having his Beast against him falling for the Miko was a brilliant twist, especially scine in many stories, its his Beast whose pining for it. Quick question though, what does Ja-ne mean?
I like this story a lot but I have one question... what the hell are chocolate blues? what colour eyes are they? I've seen them described as this before and I thought to myself how can eyes be brown like chocolate yet blue at the same time? So I had to ask:P I can't wait to read more! I hope Kagome stays strong and makes Sesshoumaru grovel some before the end;)
Great story, please update soon.
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