I loved how you portrayed Sesshomarus character in this story. One of the best portrayals of him. I hope you finish this story. It really is brilliant.
cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 43) - Mon 05 Jun 2023
ES LA SEGUNDA VEZ QUE LEO ESTA HISTORIA PUES DESPUES DE ONCE AÑOS QUE LA EMPEZASTE YA PERDI LAS ESPERANZA,Y ESPERO QUE NO TARDES OTROS TANTOS AÑOS EN ACTUALIZARLA Y EN TERMINARLA DE UNA VEZ QUE LA DEJASTE EN LO MEJOR
I'm enjoying this so far. Hmm...I wonder if her old master will change her heart.
Nice story so far. Could use an extra eye or edit to find any errors. The one I see the most is that you drop a word in a sentence...The small gave her a toothy grin and grabbed hold of the reins... the small ??? gave... I'm going with girl here. But there has been a couple of those. Typing too fast. Otherwise the story is interesting and moving along nicely.
Kathy (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Mar 2023
So I found this story and I know it's done and in excited to read it. However, I do have to mention that Tessaiga in the story is misspelled.
cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 43) - Sat 18 Mar 2023
Hace tanto tiempo que boy a tener que leerla de nuvo pero que le vamos hacer
Lauren (Chapter 43) - Fri 17 Mar 2023
OMG You're back! I hope that things have been good for you while you were away. I have completely forgotten what was happening in this story, so I'll have to reread. But welcome back (even if it's just for a few weeks). And happy saint Patrick's day! LOL
Gahh so good!!!!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Although when they are alone I would like to see a bit more interaction.
Welcome back and congratulations on everything Bunny-chan! All three chapters are great, please update the next chapters quickly!
Lorena (Chapter 42) - Wed 06 Jun 2018
What a time to read your story,lol. I binge read This all morning and I love how you wrote this so far, I'm eager to read his this battle will shake out
Love this story it has so much detail and interaction between all the characters sometimes people lose pace but this was perfect can't wait for your next chapter I'm glad you haven't given up on this awesome story
Oh no! I hope Kagome can get Sessh out of this mess!!!
Myella (Chapter 42) - Sat 02 Jun 2018
Loving this story!!! Thank you for updating it. Definitely on my favorite list.
Can't wait for the next update.
Very good please dont stop
This story is positively amazing! Please please please update soon!!!
Love the story
Mia (Chapter 41) - Wed 17 Jan 2018
Ahhhzhxzkzkzjdkck!!!!!
Re-read the entire story just to get to the biggest cliffy of all time. Urgh. Post soon please!
So glad you are back! Wonderful story
Wow, bunny chan! Can’t wait for the next chapter. That is a good fic too & again glad to have you back
Hi Bunnychan! So glad your back, may I ask which fanfic have you renewed inspiration? Love this crappy btw & looking forward to reading more!
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