Great chapter. I hope Kagome is able to undo the thing that Kira did to her body.
Such a cute story and I like your other characters as well. Kirai is a good ally for Kagome and someone that has her own history that Kagome can learn from.
I had hoped for more antics with moko-moko, though.
You do have some continuity issues that could be easily fixed: Kirai is mistress of either the North or the South - you use them both so it is a little confusing.
I hope you are able to finish this, at least locate and resurrect Kirai?
I am so glad you're back! Better long wait than never. ;)
Aw, poor Kira! I wonder if Kagome's determination will be enough?
Thanks so much for writing.
I love love love your story!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work!!
I am slighty confused though. Is the land the North or the South?? You have both wrote down in different chapters as the same persons lands.
(Chapter 18) - Mon 03 Nov 2014
Love it. More please x
I love this! It's incredible!
i hope they find her soon!
Maybe mokomoko will play spy and find her!!
awesonmess in the making
Please update! I want Lady Kira to be rescued!!!
Keep it coming
I think its time Kagome purified Raiden's balls. :) I will give you a cookie if this happens :)
(Chapter 17) - Tue 08 May 2012
Love it so far, I think it should have a little more SessKag moments. It's mostly kira centered I love her, but it would be nice for more SessKag fluff!!!
omg i am SOOOOO LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!! this is very interesting and i really wonder whats going to happen next :) cant wait for u to update! XD
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