Great chapter. I hope Kagome is able to undo the thing that Kira did to her body.
Such a cute story and I like your other characters as well. Kirai is a good ally for Kagome and someone that has her own history that Kagome can learn from.
I had hoped for more antics with moko-moko, though.
You do have some continuity issues that could be easily fixed: Kirai is mistress of either the North or the South - you use them both so it is a little confusing.
I hope you are able to finish this, at least locate and resurrect Kirai?
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