I like it i think you've done a wonderful job so far a few spelling errors here and there but thats just minor things :) the plot is great so far and i love your grammar usage its not to consistent. I like the details you put in your story it helped me to imagine the scene as i read and went along so wonderful job keep up the great work i love it :) you're a great writer kudos to you :) and your fanfiction is great i like the idea keep it up and dont give up :)
OMG i'm so happy you came to dokuga this rocks! i cant wait to see more!
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