Although I am only on the second chapter, I really enjoy your story. Umm, I feel kind of uncomfortable about telling you this, but by the end of the chapter it was kinda starting to irk me. You use apostrophes when they are not necessary. They are used for showing possession, while you also use them to show plural form. Such as "He waved his hand's around" when it only needs "he waved his hands around". Just an example. sorry if I bothered you by telling you, I am only trying to give you constructive information so you can improve yourself to be an even better writer than you are now.
I like it---please continue it, don't leave me in suspense!!!
Kera (Chapter 6) - Thu 05 May 2011
awesome! Keep up the great work!
O_O o0o0o0o0o this was a good update!
i really do love this fic! i wonder what Sess was testing Kagome for when he attacked her and i love that her and her beasty are on such good terms that they are having a dark together at her mental mind park!
kk (Chapter 5) - Fri 18 Mar 2011
this is AWESOME pls continue writing i wish to see how it ends
Belezaria (Chapter 4) - Thu 24 Feb 2011
i love this story, i was entrapped by just reading the 4 chapetrs you have up at the moment. so please make more chapters when you can, i wish to see how this story ends. PLEASE! =D
jojo661538 (Chapter 4) - Sun 20 Feb 2011
wow what great work i really love this story so her beast claimed sesshoumaru as hers wonder what would happen if her beast got lose any ways keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
hahahahahah funny puppy! hahahahahahahahaha
*giggles* SHIRTLESS!
have i told you that i love this ficcy? b/c i do!
GAWD I can NOT believe you ended it like that!!!!!!! Lucky Kagome gets to see Sexy Sesshy WITHOUT a shirt mmmmm hehe :) I love your story update again soon!
jojo661538 (Chapter 2) - Sat 12 Feb 2011
another great chapter i really like your story keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
wonderful chapter update! i loe how this story is going so far, and i hope that sessmomma and kagome can get along, also that sess and kagome can i wouldnt put it past her to stand up to sesshomaru.
jojo661538 (Chapter 1) - Fri 04 Feb 2011
i really like this story keep up the great work i hope you update soon ^_^
I love your story! It's AMUSING!!! I can't wait until you update, so Pleaseee UPDATE SOON, I just can't wait to see what happens when she meets Sesshoumaru!!
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