That was an exciting and revealing chapter! This time demon is going to be a terrible foe, especially since it has an ally. Poor Kagome, she doesn't have many emotional resources here, she can't lean on her friends like before, and she has, at least for the time being, alienated Sesshomaru. Her family could very likely be dead already. I'm curious if something more is going to develop between Kagome and Sesshomaru's cousin... Very, very exciting! I can't wait for the next...
*noms on pocky* update soon duckie i want to see sessy and kagomeness!!!! >_> like a kiss... or something.. ya know xD <3333
update soon duckie >_> i luffs it <3
katlady (Chapter 8) - Tue 04 Jan 2011
...BAKA COMPY it posted be for i was done typeing :P
any who the bother hting is just my Guess
you have me hooked now and I wsill now poke you for updates when I see fit
Great story so far
Kat
katlady (Chapter 8) - Tue 04 Jan 2011
HAHAHAHAHAH THERE BROTHERS HALF BROTHERS
awer poor kagome always in the middle of brothers
like it
love it
now up date it
hola (Chapter 8) - Tue 04 Jan 2011
| woooohooo!!! *victory dance* yay new chapter!! :)
giiirrrrrl, that Ren. he's t.r.o.u.b.l.e. i can just tell... and if Hisoka is his mama, wouldnt he be a hanyou? or maybe Hisoka's not human? hmmmm.. *ponders*
(side note: when Kagome said her hair was just like starlight, i couldnt help but think of Howl's Moving Castle when at the end Sophie's hair changes colors and Howl tells her it looks just like starlight. it's squee-worthy)
I was cringing (not sure how to spell that) the whole time Kagome was confronting Sesshoumaru. It was prettypainful. :( My evil twin is saying ''screw your family! stay with him!''. i mean, her 'other her' was probably considering it, why cant she? I agree with Sesshy, in that there is no difference between the 'two'. She just doesnt remember what happened.. Maybe we could see if that bite mark is still there...
Anyways, I'm SOOOO glad you updated. :) Cant wait for t next glorious installment! (ok, yes i can, i just don' wanna :P)
<3 Amazing! Simply amazing! Your writing style is so smooth and easy to slip into, I found myself squealing and laughing or yelling at the computer as I read this story. I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for providing such an entertaining read for me on this snowy Tuesday night! <3
-A
love it can not wait for updatr, pleasse soon. it is a wonderful story, love Ren, cant wait to see him and Kagome together just to make lord fluffy jelous
Outstanding! Love your original characters (I never thought I would be able to say that in a review...) and congratulations on the state of your meniscus!
Now, I suppose you will have to figure out how to fix whatever IS wrong. Selfishly, I hope it doesn't interfere with your writing TOO much...
Seriously, though. I hope it's something not too bad...
I keep falling in love with this story, Awesome job, avalon. Sitting on my hands here, waiting new update ^^
Amazing story, amazing chapter! Ican't wait for more.
This just keeps getting better and better :D
I keep wondering though, is this a parallell world or what ? Is there another Kagome, the one who made those memories ?
I guess I'll wait and see :)
bug (Chapter 7) - Mon 27 Dec 2010
Loving the story, can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for writing!
Tsuki (Chapter 6) - Sat 18 Dec 2010
Great update! I love every second of reading this story! :)
Ooooh I'm so happy you updated sooner :D
And with such a good chapter too !
Yeah, the chase scene was really cool, I really liked the ten gouges in the bark xD So, Sesshoumaru, not so unaffected, huh ?
I also liked that he got injured while saving Kagome, most of what we see in fanfiction is him saving the day without getting a hair out of place, so that was a nice change ! As always, can't wait for the next chapter, in the meantime, I wish you happy holidays !
Loveyaa (Chapter 6) - Sat 18 Dec 2010
I really liked this chapter. It may just be my favorite so far. I like that there is so much tension. Lets see how long it takes to build before it eventually breaks. The memories that randomly flash into Kagome's head will def be adding to it. I wonder if we will find out what it was really like for the other Kagome and for the other Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Where is the other Kagome btw?
This was a really cute chapter! Eager for more!!
Kat (Chapter 6) - Fri 17 Dec 2010
I'm really enojying this story; the dynamics between Sesshoumaru and Kagome are great. I look forward to the rest of it!
Ashley (Chapter 6) - Fri 17 Dec 2010
Simply amazing
If I wasn't in a room with a bunch of people and they weren't already staring at me oddly because of the stupid grin on my face, I would have yelled KISS HER DAMN IT! I'm interested to figure out how exactly Kagome will get Sesshoumaru to consider her words. I'm also stuck on trying to figure out the mystery behind her memories. The glimpses kill me! Keep up the great work and have fun on your vacation! ^_^
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