Reviews for Splinter Fate by R.M. Avalon

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Terri (Chapter 12) - Sun 29 Mar 2020

I am enjoying your story. Are you going to be adding more chapters soon. 


Kanda (Chapter 12) - Mon 24 Jul 2017

omg. i need closure and this is the last chapter i come to! and you haven't updated! what's really bothetjng me is that THESE TWO i've come to like being together even though that Kagome is not the right one fer that world but then i find myself thinking if there isn't really just ONE kagome but multiple versions of the feudal era (thanks to our special well youkai here). she's just able to assimilate herself to each one of them and take on the role of the one that was in that world. making her "one and the same" as sesshoumaru (sort of) put it. or maybe that's just me hoping that suddenly she wouldn't be thrust from that world when the well youkai is defeated and the "right" feudal era returns, unlove-y sesshoumaru and all. but then, thats a whole bunch of other drama and i don't wanna be giving you any ideas (unless you've already thought of them yerself, eheh). here's hoping. ._. oh! and then there's the whole kikyo thing! what's up with her? please come back and finish this? pretty please with powdered sugar, whip cream, and caramel syrup on top? qq


angelsleap07 (Chapter 12) - Sun 08 May 2011
I hardly ever review stories. but for this one I'll make an exception. I am so in love with this storyline. its really one of the better fanfics with a slightly alternate universe setting. keep going keep going! im on the edge of my seat!

Loveyaa (Chapter 12) - Thu 05 May 2011

I am so glad that you have decided to continue this!! A lot has happened compared to how much time has passed. I wonder how things will end though. Kagome has to crunch in some serious training and loving of Sesshoumaru before she (hopefully doesn't) dies or is whisked away to the future. It would totally suck if Sesshoumaru had to wait all that time but Kagome didn't. Either way I am looking forward to a pretty garguatian battle :)


Synyster Star (Chapter 12) - Sun 06 Mar 2011

YAY!!!! A NEW UPDATE!!! HUZZAH!!!! Oh my day is complete! LOL I loved it!!!!! Ava, you tease me yet again, so close yet so far ;p. I can't wait for them to have another *clears throat* moment if you catch my drift LOL.


Velvet Sometimes (Chapter 12) - Sun 06 Mar 2011

*Twitches*

Aaaaavvvvvaaaaaaaaa- Birrrrdyyyyyyyy

*Gribs Pitchfork* I think you and I need to have a little talk. XDD

 

On a another note; I love it. Its a wonderful chapter, and her dream confrentation didn't interupt the flow of it at all. But dang it why haven't they screwed yet?! *stops foot like a child*


Hairann (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Feb 2011

Congratulations, Splinter Fate has won third place best action/adventure for the 4th Quarter 2010 at Dokuga. You can find your winner banner here: http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/13/4/2974.png Congrats again and keep up the great work!


Ashes (Chapter 11) - Fri 18 Feb 2011

FYI; just after the bond, when you were describing hearts beating you used 'his' twice. And you just had to have a cliff hanger didn't you? *tch!* Looks like the edge of my seat is going to get worn down with my giddy anticipation.

oh well.

Lovely chapter, it did my heart good. I've really enjoyed the journey thus far and can't wait to see how it all turns out.


Synyster Star (Chapter 11) - Thu 17 Feb 2011

OMG!! I lovvveeedd it!! You minx you xD teasing meh like that *grumbles* LOL Oh well, I still love you!!! Update soooonnn!!!!


Mia (Chapter 10) - Thu 17 Feb 2011

I simply adored this chapter!!!!!!!!!


hola (Chapter 11) - Thu 17 Feb 2011

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!! you updated! *is supah happy*

 

can i just say, this line gave me goosebumps:

Shesshomaru’s eyes narrowed slightly. “If you did, you would damn yourself to a life spent searching for something to fill the rift left behind by the absence of my presence.”

ugh. if that is not the perfect description for love lost, i dont know what is.

what a romantic, sweet, and fufilling chapter this was :)

glad to hear the knee is better, and huzzah for moving! do you like your new place?

congrats again on all the noms! ^-^

-jenis


Velvet Sometimes (Chapter 11) - Thu 17 Feb 2011

You horrible tease.

Horrible terrible tease. *huffs*

I adore it though. This chapter is simply amazing and I love the spin oyu put on thier bond; that they didn't have to be mated to have a bond of that caliber. Its a refreshing change from the norm and I thoughoutly enjoyed it the change of pace. And the sexy times scene! I've been bugging you for it for weeks now! XD Finally!

 

Keep up the good work love, I cant wait for your next chapter. You know i'm your #1 fan. ^^

 

Velvey


Catherine (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Feb 2011

Wow, I love this story so much. I'm so excited for your next update!


Catherine (Chapter 2) - Sat 12 Feb 2011
I am seriously loving this story so far. I can't imagine how hard it would be to go back and have everything you once understood be completely different. I'm so excited to keep reading!

Selenay (Chapter 10) - Mon 07 Feb 2011

Omg, this is amazing, I love this story~!


Kamiki (Chapter 10) - Mon 31 Jan 2011

This has been AMAZING so far and I adore the characterization of Sesshomaru! I cannot wait to see what happens next :)


katlady (Chapter 10) - Mon 17 Jan 2011

:HUGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS:: I LOVE  YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

 

OMG  such a good update  Please  update again soon


LoveNabokov (Chapter 10) - Sun 16 Jan 2011

Another wonderful chapter! I love your style, it draws me in and cradles my mind. I find myself curling up in my bed on these snowy nights with your work. Thank you! I truly can't wait for the next chapter.

-Love


TheMikoShivae (Chapter 10) - Sat 15 Jan 2011

awesome chappy!


Ashes (Chapter 10) - Sat 15 Jan 2011

I like it! Especially the end. (^_^)


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