Reviews for Mad World by Erynnn

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lara (Chapter 13) - Tue 29 Mar 2011

This is both scary & interesting.I like the story but I want Kag & Sessh together & that Hell Hound is EVIL ,Scary & ruthless.

 


KEdakumi (Chapter 13) - Tue 29 Mar 2011

Oooo.... Can't wait to see what happens next!    Are they speaking Na'vi (from the Avatar movie)?

Please update soon!


moonfairy (Chapter 13) - Tue 29 Mar 2011

The ryouken are speaking navi?


xianthra (Chapter 13) - Tue 29 Mar 2011

 im loving this story can't wait for the next chapther :)

the ryouken are using the the)language of the Na’vi am i right ?

 keep up the great work love

from the netherlands

xianthra


Tarawriter (Chapter 13) - Tue 29 Mar 2011

I'm so glad I'm not crazy and that there is a chapter thirteen because, to be honest, I was sitting here thinking, "Wait, did I really read this story last night?  I swear I've read chapter 12, but maybe I didn't read it and just think I did?"  Then came the, "Maybe I'm losing my mind, OMG, what's wrong with my brain?" screech.  O.O

On to the chapter review!  I sat up reading this last night and reminding myself to write a review when my head was more clear.  I've really enjoyed this story, and (being a classic rock fan) I have to admit I nearly danced with joy over the Bad Moon Rising title last chapter.  XD  This is an entertaining fic, quick paced but not unbelievable at all.  The characters are developing naturally, which I love, and your original characters add so much to the universe, excellent!  I'm looking forward to reading more.  As for the language, I had to use Google on that one, but if I'm right, it's from the film Avatar and the Na'vi people spoke it.  Though I can't be certain the dictionary I found is right since I didn't see the movie.


Ceysna (Chapter 12) - Mon 28 Mar 2011

*jaw drops* holy.... Whoa! Did he go insane or somethin?!? Omg, please update, I gotta know!!!


lara (Chapter 12) - Mon 28 Mar 2011

Wow .Letter saying Inu is off killing innocents like a madman?

I love your story & I look forward to more from you . I can't imagine what will happen next .I'm afraid of these Hellhound females that want Sessh even if they have to trick, lie ,kill or use dishonor to get him.They are even willing to challenge & kill Kagome if they feel that it is  needed. I only hope that the reason Kagome is trapped back in the feudal era & with Sesh are part of what ever destiny is keeping her there & the well sealed . I also hope the power she has that she showed in ch 1 when she was attacked & with no weapon ,she used the immense power thru her hands & the backlash of her power that was so intense it sent her flying into the air a far distance from where she'd had her fight.

I look forward to your next update,this is a very interesting story & I can't wait to see what will happen next. 


Sesshomaru (Chapter 12) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

Sesshomaru and I Headalphafemale have read your story. It is very enjoyable. We both love the' feather joke' that Kagome played on Sesshomaru, and his reaction to it. Please continue writing. I know this story is yours to do with as you wish, but please don't kill Inuyasha. He could still be under a Kikyo spell with recovery by removing the necklace. Or sent away with a new longing for sea traveling on a boat. Or a new life style, from noticing and protecting a new lover, he discovers elsewhere. Iam sure with the amazing writing abilities you have, something else can be decided. Thanks for your good work, please continue.


crin_fausta (Chapter 12) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

Your story has potential! I can't wait to read the next chapter!


Ceysna (Chapter 11) - Sun 13 Mar 2011

O.O Oooooooo A battle!? HOLY peoples? But Kags had the jewel inside her for 15 years... was born with it INSIDE her... hmmm..... donno! you tell us oh master of the story writer!!! >:^) This should be good. I can't wait for the update!! peaz hurry!


lauren (Chapter 11) - Sat 12 Mar 2011

Really enjoying this story! Awaiting updates!


lara (Chapter 10) - Thu 24 Feb 2011

I hope things are starting to heat up....but if it doesn't include Sessh & his inner beast deciding they love & want to make Kagome their Mate for life then it's pointless..I hate stories where Kagome end up being used & abused emotionally by one bro only to fall into love accidentally with the older bro who either denies,fights & avoids her & the entire issue & she ends up heartbroken & unloved again or Sessh decides to just take her virginity & use her to sate himself & then dump her? Kagome deserves to be loved & cherished & if it's not possible then it's not worth it


GreyEcho (Chapter 10) - Wed 23 Feb 2011

That was awesome. lol  love what she did to his room, and the little pixi kagome voice. lol and with that ending...can't wait to see what happens now.


Ceysna (Chapter 10) - Tue 22 Feb 2011

8^O OMG KAGS!!! Is she trying to get herself killed!?!?! Lol feathery sesshy... X^D omg! Yay updates!! Keep em coming!

*cackles* Time for some sexual tension, YEA!! *rubs hands together evilly* can'y WAIT to see how this works out. >:^>


Phaedairu (Chapter 10) - Tue 22 Feb 2011

Oh my, that was a great chapter! Poor Kagome, Sesshy just left her all confused.

Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!


Ceysna (Chapter 9) - Tue 22 Feb 2011

*stares* Pixie Kagome? OMG YES!! LOL!! please update!! This is great!! *falls over laughing* AND he stared!! Oh you should have made her call him on it! oh PLEASE make her do it next time if he does it! please?!?! *oh knees begging* oh please oh please!!! *holds up Sesshy plushie* bribe?


Phaedairu (Chapter 9) - Tue 15 Feb 2011

You are a wonderful writer! I love the long chapters and how slowly the relationship between Sesshy and Kag is budding!

It's a great thing, since most of the fanfics I read have them rushing into relationships ><

I love the characters you've brought in and I absolutely can't wait to read more! :)


lara (Chapter 9) - Tue 15 Feb 2011

I'm confused & although I really want to see Kagome & Sessh get together ,He seems to hate her guts & not really want her around so I'm confused at her reason for being somewhere she doesn't appear to be wanted while having nothing to do while she is there. I could understand if they appeared to be growing closer or such but it doesn't seem that way at this point.It only seems as if he dislikes everything about her & that irks me. I guess I'll just have to wait to see where this goes next...I just wish he would show some interest in her


ghost_youkai (Chapter 8) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

The story so far is just getting started and I can't wait to see when the real drama starts! Aside from that, I can't help but wonder what Hassuru would do in her desperation to obtain Sesshoumaru. Keep up the awesome work ~^_^~

Though it might be a bit late, I took the challenge of drawing Hassuru. Hope you like it though there are many mistakes.

http://ghost-youkai.deviantart.com/art/Hassuru-196303561

 


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 8) - Sat 29 Jan 2011

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT continue soon your story is amazing and amusing too haha it keeps me guessing and i like that thanks and update soon :)


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