Wow... it really hit the fan, didn't it? Poor Kagome, did anyone get the license plate of that demon that ran her over? :P I guess it just didn't go the way Hassuru wanted. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
Oh, Kagome's reaction at the end of this chapter is absolutely priceless!
I read a little of this story before, quite some time ago, I think, and I'm glad that I've found it again and added it to my favorites so that I can read it while you write it...I have to say, you're a marvelous writer! Your chapters flow very smoothly into one another, and I rarely see mistakes (minor or otherwise) that need to be fixed. Kagome and Sesshomaru have stayed in character the entire time (especially in this chapter), and I applaud you for the addition of memorable original characters!
Anyway, awesome job, and keep up the spectacular work! I can't wait to see what happens next!
~Aubrey
Jazmine (Chapter 18) - Sun 14 Aug 2011
Aaaahhh Maaaa Gawwwddd :D I love your story! :) And i seiously hope Hassaru gets the butt whooping she needs :p Please conitinue soon :D
Ashley (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Aug 2011
please finish this
What beautifully descriptive writing! This last chpater just had me hooked with the interractions between Sesshomaru and Kagome. Wow that was awesome!
Lily (Chapter 18) - Sun 14 Aug 2011
If she's too reckless, Hassuru might get a suprise, not all humans are weak and defenseless. Least of all a miko of Kag's power.
~lily
Meara (Chapter 18) - Sun 14 Aug 2011
Uh-oh, somebody is not a happy camper... lol Hooray for updates! And here I thought you'd forgot about us fans, but I see you didn't and have gifted us with your skills once again!
Awesome update - it's sad to see Inuyasha come to such an end but he was lost.
I liked the ending, Sesshomaru so gentle and caring.
Please update soon I cant wait to see what happens next. Thanks.
lara (Chapter 15) - Mon 11 Apr 2011
Oh god how I hope Kagome destroys the disgustind hell hound & lives.I also want Sessh to fall madly for Kagome & vice versa. I pray for happiness in this story as I hate sad endings but wanting,wishing & hoping aside,I look forward to the next chapters eagerly.
I really enjoy your story...It has a very original plot! (something that you can't find these days anymore *sight*)
I can't wait to read the next chapter *wink*.
I love the way this story is rolling out. I don't think Tsubaki's backstory is really needed. That might inturrupt the flow of things. Can't wait to see where this is going. :)
lara (Chapter 14) - Fri 08 Apr 2011
I'm worried about Kagome.
bloodraven (Chapter 13) - Thu 07 Apr 2011
Anna (Chapter 13) - Thu 31 Mar 2011
hmm german
hikari-hime (who didn't sign in... le sigh) (Chapter 13) - Thu 31 Mar 2011
Very nice chapter :D
Ah... is it Klingon?
lol!
Dewa mata :)
Another awesome chapter! I am quite interested to find out what's the reason behind Inuyasha's rage..hmmm...*wink*
By the way...it's Na'vi language..I am not very fond of a cookie(I have some near me)...but what about a chapter??? I surely wouldn't mind....
Kalani (Chapter 13) - Wed 30 Mar 2011
i love love love this story. It's rolling nicely, it's organized, and it has plenty ofdrama but not too much.
P.S. the language is Navi, from Avatar :)
Wow that was a good chapter. I loved it... Oh as for the language that's easy it's Na'vi from the Avitar movie...... Very popular out here believe it or not. What better way to encrypt. Anyways, I hope Kagome gets her chance to talk to Inuyasha it would be a shame if he dies, but then that's life....
it's na'vi right??
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