Reviews for Mad World by Erynnn

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hikari hime (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Dec 2010

Aaaaah... what a nice change of 'scenery', no spelling mistakes, correct grammar ... hmmmm... just let me enjoy that a few more minutes please...

ahem...

anyway, you can guess I quite like your story so far. Of course, it's only the beginning, so I'm waiting for the plot to develop.

just a little -insignificant- detail (because no story is perfect), adjectives could be used a little less (there is such a thing as too much descriptions, like for example "she brushed her shining black-blue silky strands" would be laying it a little thick lol). I don't know if you get my meaning, I could explain it better in French I suppose lol, sorry if I'm being un-clear, it's definitely unintentionnal.

Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter :)

Dewa mata


Tsuki (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Dec 2010

Great update ^-^ I can't wait for more!


Tsuki (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Nov 2010

I love this so far :D Keep up the great work!


BlessedEpiphany (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Nov 2010

I don't usually start from chapter 1 of a fanfic, I tend to wait til there are a few chapters up but I decided to do something a little different and I'm glad I did. i can't wait to find out where you go with this story and what trouble our Kagome gets into. Post again soon. =)


knifethrower (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Nov 2010

Nice!  Well-written!  I can't wait to find out what kind of adventures lie in store for Kagome and her new protector.


Kanna37 (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Nov 2010

Well, it seems to be a good beginning for your forst try, so I'll be waiting for the next chapter quite happily!

Amber


InuLover (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Nov 2010

WOW! I'm impressed.  Is this your 1st fanfic, or your 1st Sess/Kag fanfic? For a 1st fic, I'm even more impressed.  It's very good, and very well written.  Good spacing, no errors, and I like the fact that the story happens after the official ending of "Inuyasha".  Not too many stories out there that do.  So, of course, I will be following this one to see where it leads.  Continue on, please!  :D


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