Great story. I love strong Kagome stories

I absolutely loved this story.  It was great. And as mulan is one of my favorite stories, I think this was a great adaptation.

I do have two questions.  As I was reading the chapter where she gives birth, I thought it said that the pups were one girl and then be boy.  But in the chapter where they reunite and are in the family den Sess refers to the pups as sons.  So yeah... That is one... The other is strange... I may have missed it.... But I don't think you ever told us the pups names.  But like I said I may have missed it...

Besides my nitpicking.... I really did love this story.  In fact I pretty much love all of your stories.  You are definitely one of my favorites to read.  Thanks for writing.  And keep upbthebgood work!

Hmmm while I know rape was very common in that era, I would have thought Kagome would fight or maybe be have more bitterness to Sesshomaru for her rape and dishonor among her pack?
Or maybe she just realized there was no point in being angry and bitter and let it go?

Other than that, this was an awesome story. the angst and betrayl was just heart wrenching and I cried with Kagome as well as celebrated when they succeeded at everything. LOVED IT!

Not bad. I really enjoyed that read. Something to break up the insomnia. Badass Kagome and all made it much better. Didn't expect the royal connection but it worked.

So I am completely in love with this story! I love the fact that you had them fighting against their instinct most of the way here. You wrote this immensely well! Thank you!

The story was amazing and I enjoyed it.

WOW!!! I loved this story!! My eyes are killing me and I have a huge headache from the non-stop reading.. I mean DAMN this was sooooo good!!!!!!!! Bravo!!!!

Sugar0o, I love this! You're amazing!

You did a really good job on this story thanks for the read and your hard effort. ^_^

:D

I enjoyed this story very much.  Great job.  :D

Do not fear the horror or your readers.  If you write a villain dark enough to cause your readers to cringe and cry and become angry with you for even conceiving such a thing, then you have succeeded in endearing them to your hero's and heroin's all that much more.

I have in the works a very beautiful and seductive evil.  :)  it's my own story and not a fanfic, so it would never come up on here.  :D

Just so you know.  I love this twist on the Inuyasha story.

I hope there is a sequel. I loved this story. Thanks.

This was a great story & I really loved it.

It was very good. It was odd & I wonder if this is it for the 2

I Loved your story! It was really detailed and the emotional depth was fantastic. I am looking forward to reading the rest of your stories. Please keep writing you're really good!

Now here comes the novel I said was coming, lol.

First of all, I have to say, this was a mind blowing story, and I am very much in love with your writing style! I was I could write as beautifully as you do, and I'm totally jealous, lol. The way you write simply has this feel about that that swoops me up, and takes me to the world you have created. Not many stories captivate my attention like yours had, and I must say, I bow to you, lol.

I understand now the term "losely" that you used, but none the less, I think it was a great idea to use Mulan as a base off. It helped create the angst, and darkness that was needed for the story. As for the rape scene, I could understand very well how someon had gotten literally sick from it. The way Naraku was acting, while this poor girl was suffering, just tears your heart. He was acting so casual, as if nothing was out of the ordinary, and it sickened me. Which of course meant you did an incredible job.

Kagome was left on her own while Sesshomaru didn't even know she was his mate or even carrying his pup. Of course, that only cause more angst, since his father couldn't even understand why his son had let her go when she should have died. I appreciated the sense of honor in certain characters, as it made them stand out from the others.

I must say, I loved Kagome's beast. I never thought about her with one, and I can't recall reading a story where she had one. It was a new experience, and I loved it. I must say, she needs to have one more often. It added depth and a certain twist to her character, which I enjoyed very much.

This story had everything I love, and once again, i can't do nothing else but now to the master. You are an amazing writer, and from the other one shot I've read from you, everything you write down comes out absolutely amazing! Your art is amazing, but don't give up on writing either since you are very talented.

Maddie.

Interesting lemon, but I think the gag and some other parts was a little too much like saying dirty words and other stuff. but it was still good.

Love it one of the best I have read

wow, that was one amazing story, truly loved reading it