I really like this. You should definently continue.
So, I noticed that this version is slightly altered from the original that you posted on spark/ffnet... mind if I ask why? It was a beautiful story as it was, and honestly, I find this repost to be a little lacking in comparison. I mean, the basics are all there, but the wording was definately better in the original. I don't understand why you redid it, considering it was absolutely amazing before.
I'm not trying to offend you or anything of the sort, it just sort of baffles me that you would change the original context when it was so good. I really love this story, and I just had to say that - in my opinion - it's perfect as it was before. I don't think you need to touch it up at all, but if that's what you wanna do, I guess it is your story.
Please don't take any of that the wrong way. You are such a talented writer and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it before; I'm sure I will enjoy it again.
Wow, you're going to continue Sans Cors! Best news ever! This is one of my incomplete favs all time!!
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