It's a shame that you haven't continued your stories. I really love them, both this one and Double Trouble. Would love to see them get some sort of closure, at least.
jgem (Chapter 12) - Thu 31 Mar 2011
Wow! Really intense chapter. You did a really great job making me feel the run of emotions Kagome was feeling: the desperation, the desire to go on.
Can't wait to see what comes up next.
| Amazing as always! The more i read of this, the more it pulls me in.
~the darkness within~
This is really interesting~
LOVE the story so far!
And I laughed when you wrote, ""Two days ago, an incompetent imbecile wished for the life of an undead whore. In order to resurrect the bitch the jewel took two souls."
x] Great job on the story, too!
-Kukuro
| Perfect!.. I love the pace, you don't try to rush the romance and affection between these two as so many others have. This last chapter was so action packed and your description so vivid, i found it hard to leave my flashing screen. And, in the mist of all the action, Rin is reunited with her protector! I might need to go back and reread what you have on Spark, it has been awhile, but so worth the wait! Update soon.
~* the darkness within*~
Tease! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
I've enjoyed re-reading the previous chapters and now I'm excited about the new ones to come. I hope by the time they leave that place, they've discovered they want to remain mated
| Another amazing chapter, the perfect way to welcome in Friday. After a rough night, it's always nice to be able to sit back with a favorite fic! Thank you for updating so quick, you're one step closer to where you left off on Spark. All this time waiting is paying off at last. It's just as amazing this time around as it was the first time it pulled me in. Know that you have made a fan and I eagerly await the chapter!
~*the darkness within*~
YAY! he's NOT dead. But gah for what happened. Poor kagome, she was only trying to help. Curious to see what will happen. :D
| This is one of the fics I had always wished one would be completed. Looks like I chose the right time to return to world of Fanfiction. I loved this story on Spark and even after all this time, I still love this fic. Your writing style is beautiful and your plot is original. I'm sitting on pins and needles waiting to see where you go with this. Update soon please! ~* the darkness within *~
I bet no one has ever had such an intimate meal. I'm glad you didn't kill him, it would have been a bit difficult to bring everyone back. I am anxiously awaiting an update to see where you take this. An accidental mating may not be very sweet and romantic but being stuck with someone can change your perspective on alot of things. Keep up the good work.
sanguijuela (Chapter 1) - Tue 07 Dec 2010
How funny, I just commented to another written about how many writing cant stay away from using 'as' too much in their fic. That if you read a real novel, you wouldn't find this term this many time, maybe just once or twice and not on every paragraph and here you are; using 'as' in every paragraph how mediocre. Unless your a grade-schooler, are you unable to write without it? And you've have even re-written it. How sad.
emmers (Chapter 1) - Mon 06 Dec 2010
I adore this story! Please update soon!
Whoa. I imagine it was very difficult to write Sesshoumaru when he lost his cool. Well done!
Nilee1 (Chapter 8) - Mon 06 Dec 2010
Wow, I didn't see that coming. This chapter was very intense, and I loved every word.
I_I ~!!! GAH! He did not just die....did he? (I_I) *paces around like crazy* So can't wait to see the next chapter. Can't Kagome fight the weird creature things?
NOOOOOOOOOO! OMG I cried, shed tears. That was soooo touching and sad and you better not kill Sesshomaru! Please update soon I love this story. Gah stupid prideful demon. I hope Tenseiga can help him. I mean they are linked by his heart.
Nice story so far. Of course, this can't be the end so I'm looking forward to more! Love your characterization of Sesshoumaru and Kagome.
Nilee1 (Chapter 7) - Sun 05 Dec 2010
If her fingers are tingling with a pink glow than doesn't she have her Miko powers even in the land of the daed?
dayna (Chapter 5) - Tue 30 Nov 2010
All I have to say is that this story is really really good. Havent read anything like it. Great job.
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