Great story.  I love how Kagome isn't the typical "I have no idea what sex is" virgin characterization that most people like to portray her as in their stories.  While a virgin, Kagome is inexperienced but not so shy and bashful that she cannot say what is on her mind.  I also love the hillarity of the situations and events that happen throughout this writing, for I found myself laughing out loud several times (one in particular is about rainbows with flying unicorns and cotton candy).  Please keep writing, for I love your writing style!

I'd forgotten just how bipolar and naive Kagome was in this story. 

Sequal?

I loved this!!! I feel like it ended a little to soon. but still REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!

Lol poor Sesshomaru has the worst luck here... And the best. ^_^

Thank you for a awesome story. I loved it so much. Now we just need sequel please. :)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! It can't be finished please not yet!! =( this is my favorite story im sure you can go a little further. 

Amazing. Good enough to be a book all by itself. I felt like I was reading a published author.

The end...

It has been quite a ride for everybody. I'm glad that you made their big moment, a little clunky and not completely perfect. I can't belive they finally made it, and thank you for a beautiful narration of it all. I almost forgot that they still are pretty young, at 18 and 19. Hopefully there is still tons of time for their happily ever after. I can't wait to see what story you come up with next :)

While the ending was very sweet and funny, I do hope you add an epilogue. Like what happens to all of Kagome's friends, particularly Inuyasha who suffered the most. Does he finally found love? 

Kind of anticlimactic - I was expecting at least an epilogue that wraps things up.  Yes, the Syndrome is finally over - but what happens after?  

I still enjoyed it and the realism of their first time was just wonderful.  Thank you for sharing this tale.

Lol! I've got to give you kudos for making this long awaited moment so perfect. Ah, the awkwardness of the first time, the sweet reassurances, the inevitable accidents, the endearing promises, and enough sexual tension to set the room on fire. Lovely, just lovely!

Congrats on finishing this wonderful story, Sunset!

its so sad that its over but loved it frorm beging to end.thank you very much.

Woohoo gotta love hot hot hot crazy first time sex and the fact they love each other so much!!! Great ending to a great story!

It's sad that this story is over, the lemon was HOT and SEXY!!! I enjoyed and loved the story and thank you for amazing story.

It's sad that this story is over, the lemon was HOT and SEXY!!! I enjoyed and lovedthe story and thank you for amazing story.

I can't believe it's done! I loved the way you chose to end it :) It was very sweet - romantic, clumsy, hot and all in all, a great chapter about two people making love for the first (and not last) time. I especially liked the last several paragraphs of dialogue - you managed to keep it light hearted and I loved it!

I have to say, I am sad that the story has come to an end but I do like the way it has ended. Maybe, a sequel (or different story) of their mated lives (maybe with or without children) could be something to think on - I think it would make for a great story; I know I would read it!

You have done an amazing job with this story and a big CONGRATULATIONS for getting to the end is needed!

WELL DONE! :D

I look forward to the endings of your other works :)

Again, amazing work - you should be very proud! :D

I'm sorry to see this end, but I loved the ending!

Sesshoumaru falling off of the bed was hilarious and the hair thing!

Oh my purple elephants! The hair thing! ROLF!

So very very true to what really happens when there is long hair involved, too bad neither ended up with a mouth full of hair at some point that would have been to die for funny!

It was great and I will miss this story, so I'll just have to reread it when I have a chance!

~Starfyre

OMG...

That was... FREACKING INTENCE!!! 

Love it!! Thank you so much for the update! <3

This is SUCH an extra-special, awesome story!  It is one of my favorites of all time, and one that has a page in my mental Sesshomaru/Kagome scrapbook.  I love well-written stories about romantic love, and this is certainly one of those, but it's about family and friend love, as well, and that makes it extra engaging.  But it's not all sweetness here, by any extent.  Every romance needs to have conflict, and this story is full of that too.  Desperation is the spice that maxes this one extra-sexy.