Reviews for The Asylum by Daniella

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Synyster Star (Chapter 18) - Sat 11 Jun 2011

Awwwww yay!! The long awaited kiss! =D I'm so happy! But the plot thickens and the ominous message is stirring the pot I can't wait to see "who" is hunting our beloved Sessy!


Zinoviya (Chapter 17) - Wed 08 Jun 2011

I've been glued to my seat for hours reading every single chapter. You've created such an intriguing, complicated plot, with twists and mystery. it's so impressive! This is an incredible story. I can't wait to see it all unravel, to have questiions answered ans secrets revealed. I eagerly await the next chapter.


Angeltsuki (Chapter 17) - Fri 27 May 2011

It is very well written and very enjoyable. I look forward to more of your writing, and more of this story. It is not as disturbing as you lead on to believe, but it's got its merits. I hope to see more from you soon.

_ Although throughout the whole thing I kept bothering over which universe it was placed in (silly of me isn't it). It follows the canon universe, just things have happened and it is now the future, so it'd be more of canon universe than alternate if anything.


Aimee Simmons (Chapter 17) - Wed 25 May 2011

I read this all the way through.  I love it.

I am eager to read more.

There is no date on it so I don't know when it was last updated, or if it's been set aside for a long time as some stories I have fallen in love with have been.

but now that I have it in my favorites and you in my favorites...  I shall get updates in my email.  yay...  :D

 


Ekaterina1313 (Chapter 17) - Sun 22 May 2011

this is one of the most best stories i have every read. the details of each chapter amazes me and i can only wonder what you have to till us next. i have never read anything even close to the Uniqueness of your story. plz keep updating and thank you fot sharing your story with us!!!


Rizmesh (Chapter 17) - Tue 17 May 2011

This is an amazing story but I'm beginning to wonder if the romance genre was for your original character and Sesshomaru or Kagome and Sesshomaru because most of the story is focus on the past. Although I find it both cool, I'm just worried about the ending couple.

Also I know the past plays an important key, but sometimes I wish to read a chapter purely dedicated to the present time or Kagome.

Anyway your writing style is super awesome! Great job on that!

PS: Regarding the mate reincarnation thing, please don't make Kagome the reincarnation because something about that just doesn't sit well with me. I prefer the two to be their own unique individual. I love Kagome for her personality and I admire Chiyoko's own trait. Also I don't want Sesshumaru to deeply fall in love with Kagome because he found out she was his past mate, I rather he stay in love with Chiyoko if that was the case because by then I won't be presented with another Kikyo, Inuyasha and Kagome scenario... grrr!

PS2: The little humor / light hearted moments you sometimes put in the chapter is a like a light in the darkness, I always look forward to it!

 


blueminx87 (Chapter 17) - Fri 13 May 2011

You have GOT to continue this.....its an incredibly intriguing story, I can't wait to see how things continue to develop.....please update soon and don't let this story die!!!


Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 17) - Fri 13 May 2011

I am most intrigued with this story.I look forward to the next update. =)

 

Hope your move went well! =)

~~Mizuko~~


cakeiton (Chapter 17) - Mon 02 May 2011

I am loving how different this story is. I personally like dark fics, so much drama!! This is great, and I love Chiyoko! It is sad, but a great story! I look forward to your updates!

 


Azure (Chapter 17) - Mon 02 May 2011

I love it! It's so dark and sad and wonderful! Keep up the good work! I want to know who Onishi is and what he's plotting, I don't know if I can trust him or not >.>


Jai (Chapter 1) - Sun 01 May 2011

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Brittany (Chapter 17) - Thu 28 Apr 2011

Every time you update the story I get excited because I want to know what is going to happen and find out about his past and what could have caused someone to hurt him and his family the way that they have. I'm happy to see that he is stating to become a little more like himself and the way speaks etc... I'm looking forward to another update. This story makes me cry but I truly enjoy reading it.


Duchess Of Darkness (Chapter 17) - Thu 28 Apr 2011

man that was amazing only you could kept a steady story of intrigue mystery and heary felt tragedy that has a spark of hope within it to keep your readers happy  

 

take all the time u need if its what it takes to keep you writing so wonderfully

 

keep it up miss lady ill be waiting 

duchess of darkness 


Tug (Chapter 17) - Wed 27 Apr 2011
Gah! I was so not expecting this to be the last chapter. Haha. I do admit, i thought this story would be...lacking in the plot. But its quite the opposite. Im just waiting for him to wake up & be back to normal, but i have to keep reminding myself hes insane. Lol anyway, cant wait for the next chapter. C:

Alpine (Chapter 17) - Wed 27 Apr 2011

Simply wonderful. The back story on this chapter is very much needed. I will continue wondering about this 'servant' that so much resembles Kagome. I am also wondering how Sess had not simply shredded Kagome when he came to the realization that they looked so much alike. I mean with his state of mind being what it is of couse. I guess that wouldn't make for a very good love story though. ^_^

I hope that inspiration continues to give us all such a wonderful story. I am looking forward to it picking up a bit and more answers to spill forth.
Good Luck on your move.

Hugs
Alpine ^_^


TruGemini (Chapter 17) - Wed 27 Apr 2011

Poor Sess and Chiyoko...to lose a pup that way. I hoped he eventually fund Kurami and dealt her a painful death. She deserves that much.


Brittany (Chapter 16) - Fri 22 Apr 2011

This story is amazing, it is well written and thought out. Yes its dark but I like it. Its very sad what happen to is family it brought tears to my eyes to know what he has been through and to know what they did to his family. The situation with Kagome is very interesting and I'm looking forward to see where all of this leads.

Please update soon.


Treece (Chapter 16) - Fri 08 Apr 2011

Daniella,

 

With each chapter I've cried and cried, and cried some more.   I've also smiled at the heartwarming familial scenes, and hoped for more to come.

 

This story is sad, dark, beautiful and moving, so poignant.  The writing is vivid, lush, and every chapter is well mapped out.  I don't have any suggestions.  I don't have any critiques.  You're doing splendidly.

 

I like the way you transition your flashbacks, very smoothly integrating them into each scene.

 

The fact I can't guess what's is the dark secrets hovering in the past, and who Onishi may be (I have my suspicions) and his mysterious visitor with green eyes who bumped into Kagome in the hall. It keeps me on the edge and I like it.

I'm looking forward to more and hope that you get plenty of rest to enjoy this weekend.  And to update--soon!

 

Thanks for writing this very original tale from one of my fav series! 

 

Matane!

 

 


soulNchantress (Chapter 16) - Wed 06 Apr 2011

I just don't know what to make of this story.  Don't get me wrong, it's an excellent story.  You draw people in and swing their emotions by mere words!  It's well done.   It is just that I keep expecting a twist, or a real breakthrough.  Which makes me wonder how long this story is going to be, because I know that in real life, he wouldn't be fixed overnight.

This story makes me sad, and a little aprehensive.   It's just awful what happened to his family.  I still don't see why it is so important for Kagome to be the one to fix him, let alone for her to know about intimate details of his past.  The aprehensive part comes in because I am really worried that in your story, he will never be cured/helped/fixed, and that he will be insane and miserable for the rest of his existance. (That's a hell of a long time for a demon!!)

I guess this story is like a horror story for me.  You sit on the edge of your seat 'cause you KNOW there is a monster around the corner, but you still want to look anyway.  You just can't help yourself.

I'm worried about what will happen, but I just can't stop myself from verifying or sighing in relief with every update.

All in all, you really have strung my emotions along with every chapter.  I may just be a wrung out limp dishrag (emotionally speaking) by the time this is finished.  LOL

Again, I want to tell you that I think you are doing a splended job writing this story.  It's so dark and complicated it can't be easy, but you make it seem so.  Excellent work!!


TheMikoShivae (Chapter 16) - Mon 28 Mar 2011

Thank you for the wonderful update!!!

 

can't wait for the next one :)


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