That last line was unexpected and threw me off kilter! But its such a Sesshoumaru thing to say! 

*jaw hits floor* your alive??? AND Sesshy makes pervy comments while he's nuts??WOW this is a good fic!! *scoots closer to screen* whens the next update? I gotta see more! this is goooooooooooooood!

Not sure how much Kagome mean't to Sesshoumaru in the past....can not wait to find out. Another interesting chapter.

XD  nothing less would be expected of the great lord sesshoumaru XD

I love this story so much, that little comment of his made my day (also counteracted the drama previous happening, which is good ^^)

I can't say that I am trully sad after reading such a great chapter, but do know that you leaave us sad whenever you don't update.

This chapter was a bit hard to read. I don't know if it is hormons, my mood in general, or what else, but I could feel tears prickling behind my eyes at some points while reading this update. Sesshomaru brings forward a deep feeling of loneliness and his pain is tangible through every word that you write. I know that real life can be a pain, specially if you are so busy, but please don't abandon this story! It would really hurt all your readers if we never find out what happened. Please update soon again!

lol great way to end the chapter. I like how I can see the story progressing.

Good grief Sesshomaru is completely bonkers...and I LOVE it! I definitely understand why you've been nominated so much and won those awards; you most definitely deserve them!

The fact that you managed to put Sesshomaru, of all people, into an asylum and keep him completely in character is amazing. I'd always toyed around with the thought of making him go insane but never had the guts to do it; you did it and you've done it very, VERY well. I'm absolutely loving the way this is progressing. It's obvious that you've got this planned out, and I have to say that your plan is only drawing me in more and more--I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Anyway, keep up the excellent work! I'll be lokng forward to the next chapter (and will probably give a better review in the way of constructive criticism too, if you don't mind) and happy writing!

~Aubrey

(p.s. - while I'm thinking about it, you do have a few spots in the most recent chapters where the gender-specific pronouns are mixed up, and a few instances where you might have put "they" when you meant "the".)

A telling of the future? Maybe she'll get the chance to enjoy what he has to offer as well. LOL!

I've been WAITING for this update! (in a good way)

Congrats on the nomination *wink*

Also, this chapter was great; SO many things going on in it. I look forward to the next one!

I'm glad to see this story back in action! It's been far to long to see it a the top of my 'Favorite Stories' list. And I'm also glad to see that Sesshoumaru's still got it! ;D lol I can't wait to this story unravels more, especially with this mystery character that keeps poking around Kagome! Keep up the amazing work. I can't wait to read more!

Oh my! This was very naughty of Sesshomaru! Lol! Now Kagome wont be able to get those words out of her head :) This was a great chapter. I like the mysterious guy appearing around and Im very curious about him. Also, I am pleased to see Kagome and Onishi's relationship improve. Thanks for writing!

From sunny San Diego California, I stand and applaud you. When I read the Summary for this story and dove in, I was unsure. Seeshourmaru is always the lead and the strength. I always find him in control and full of certainty in his role. But here...you've done something wonderful. You've created a great story line, and you've switched the role of the protector and the ward. I know you must be a busy woman, so don't let people rush you into writting. We have lives. I cannot wait till the next update in this chapter. Thank you for taking the times to write something such as this.

very good story! i love reading the flashbacks from his pups births

i loved how you have them comfort eachother like they really do belong together in this world plz kepp writing much love

                         Ekaterina1313

X^D Omg I love this fic! The whole bitter/sweetness of it all is very moving and leaves me on the edge of my seat, practically begging for more. Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chap. Keep up the great work!

wow...

the story is so dark...

i do hope they find happiness together soon...

who wants to still kill sesshoumaru? and y?

do update soon.

cheers

Omg that was amazing and creepy... are you going to add another chapter?

There is some progress in this chapter, and intrigue.  I grateful for more hints fo what's brewing but sections were filler.

Well written, good dialogue, and it leaves me eager for follows.

thanks for the update.

I waited soooo long for the next chapter and here it is and................ it was fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder what happens next, please keep writing.

That chapter was amazing. I really want to know what happens and what is going on, why are people coming after him and what does Kagome have to do with it. Sesshomaru seems to be coming around and his mind is coming back slowly.

I wonder is Inuyasha will be in any chapters? Maybe flashbacks?

I can't wait for you to update.